Talk:Synthetic Breed

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Besides the awful peacockery of about two-thirds of this article and the verbosity ("psychotic blasts of biomechanical fury"--really?), there are logical problems too--the band was founded in 2002, but didn't get going until this one guy joined in 2001? Serious edits are called for here, and if factual errors result, please set them straight--but such errors are likely caused by unclarity, ambiguity, and verbosity in the version I had to work with. Drmies (talk) 03:27, 21 November 2008 (UTC)