Talk:Synthetic colorant

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This page is quite strong. The one note I have is that the lead is perhaps too broad. Start instead with a clear, succinct statement of what early synthetic colorants are (with the phrase "early synthetic colorants were... etc.) as your first sentence. Additionally, perhaps there is too much material on this page. Wikipedia pages for topics that are of specialized interest perhaps should not be this long. All in all, good job.

NicholasOrnstein (talk) 18:48, 15 February 2020 (UTC)

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Peer Review
This is a very complete article. You have a great amount of sources. The visual aid that the images provide is excellent. It might be useful to go through the page and add Wikilinks to "Altamira or Lascaux" to provide extra clarity and to allow a reader to hover over the words and get a quick blurb about those two places while reading this page. Overall a great contribution and page. --Redheadweek13 (talk) 00:10, 16 February 2020 (UTC)