Talk:T. D. Wells Middle School

Still looks like an advertisement/marketing
Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, and should not be used to reproduce marketing statements. For example Wells Middle School is continuously making changes to the campus and improve the environment for the students and staff. This statement should be cited, it is likely a quotation or paraphrase from somewhere. Also, it is not a fact, but merely vague marketing propaganda (continuously making changes ... improve the environment). If you want to keep this sort of statement then this will have to be reported as a statement by an author, e.g., "Wells Middle School claims that it is "continuously making changes to the campus..."(citation).

I hope this clarifies some of the concerns that editors will have with this article.

A few other points: formatting of the information and wikifying/external-linking would be helpful. Also, realize that no one owns an article, so status as original creator is not significant. Hope this helps. I want to encourage you to continue improving this article. --Jeffmcneill talk contribs 17:53, 28 October 2007 (UTC)


 * Good progress on NPOV. I removed the POV dispute tag. --Jeffmcneill talk contribs 21:38, 31 October 2007 (UTC)

Original deletion contest
I am contesting the deletion of this post because I believe this is a good start to the introduction of this school. Many other schools have posts on wikipedia that are much less informative then the one I just posted. This post could help someone who has a few simple questions about T.D. Wells Middle school. Contact information is one of the most common things people try to access through the internet and I have provided this. Overall this post is useful and I am also hoping more people will be able to add to this post.

Jasontravishicks 00:41, 22 October 2007 (UTC)

Underconstruction
I am the original maker of this article and I am currently updating and correcting the problems on this page. --Jasontravishicks 01:42, 25 October 2007 (UTC)

hangon -- advertisement
I believe that I have changed this article to be less like a advertisement and more like an informative article. Please let me know what you think. Jasontravishicks 10:23, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

neutrality
I believe I have updated the neutrality of this article please let me know what you think. Jasontravishicks 10:27, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

Underconstruction
I am the original maker of this article and I am still currently updating and correcting the problems on this page. Jasontravishicks 10:28, 28 October 2007 (UTC)

Neutrality updated again
I made some small adjustments to the text and format. The neutrality should be even as the article just displays facts and not opinions from one side or the other. Please remove the tag if you believe this to be true or let me know the specifics of what you believe to be the cause of the tag staying up. Jasontravishicks 03:47, 30 October 2007 (UTC)