Talk:T. J. Lavin

Opening comment
This entry looks like it was written by a kid with limited, specific knowledge of the subject. This entry needs more in-depth information and better writing. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.161.114.71 (talk) 18:46, 22 September 2007 (UTC)

Rewrite
The article was a huge coat rack. So I started by slicing and dicing, removing trivia, and putting it all into one life story. There are still issues with the level of content in certain areas, but I think it's better.Wjhonson (talk) 16:37, 14 November 2013 (UTC)