Talk:T. Jane Zelikova

Peer review
I think this is really good draft of your biography! I really liked how you focused on her activism work and think that the first paragraph sets up the rest of it really nicely. It's a good length and the tone stays neutral. But, don’t forget to add hyperlinks and citations and make sure to keep your paragraphs organized by topics, you’ve written it all really well but adding some headings might help to make sure things flow together nicely—I found it helpful to look at other scientist’s Wikipedia pages to get ideas for structure. Also, where did she go to college and get her PhD? And it might be good to add a few more of her notable publications to emphasize her impact on the field in addition to her activism. Overall, I think this will turn out really well! --Michellewolford (talk) 15:55, 9 November 2018 (UTC)

Becca's comments
Your bio needs subheadings (this will create the structure) and an info box You need to hyperlink text Jane is not a professor of biology (at least I don't think) instead of saying "but her family" say "and her family immigrated to the United States when she was 12, to Atlanta, Georgia. You need citations you need to develop the sections more - each topic needs to have another sentence at minimum. you are missing a lot of information (e.g. education) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Waterbarnes (talk • contribs) 21:49, 10 November 2018 (UTC)