Talk:T. R. Schellenberg

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 28 January 2019 and 14 May 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Rtetter.

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Suggestions for improvement
Some suggestions for improving this page: add in Schellenberg's specific contributions to the field and elaborate on them (the lead section is really vague and not elaborated on in the body); his importance to archival theory overall; debates he might have engaged in with other scholars; scholarship and a more detailed look at his career highlights. The page could also use some more citations (only one source is in the references section and few are cited). Also, I suggest reframing section breaks (e.g. instead of career, I would do a broader title like work with sub-sections). Annbpk12124 (talk) 02:37, 12 March 2018 (UTC)annbpk12124

I thought the Biography section was a bit lacking, so I thought it could use a bit of tweaking. I added more context as to why Schellenberg's parents moved to the United States, and I gave more specific information on his education. I'm going to continue to move work over from my sandbox, but if either of you feel like these changes are unnecessary, please reach out to me on my talk page. Rtetter (talk) 15:50, 1 May 2019

Seems like a citation is needed for the end of the "Schellenberg on Appraisal" section. anne_mi 18:48, 22 April 2018 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Triciaglaser (talk • contribs)
 * Added citations--Thanks! Also, since we're both actively working on the same page, I tried to combine some of our sentences to reduce a few redundancies between your text and mine and to shift some of my work so it's in chronological order (inserted between a few of your sentences). Best Annbpk12124 (talk) 19:17, 22 April 2018 (UTC)