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Hi!!

I need some expert advice on my recent edit, I have started contributing to Wikipedia few days back and recently started with basic contribution like grammatical error, copy-writing error finding. Please spare few minutes to guide me here in my contribution journey.

Mybiryanibykilo (talk) 18:00, 7 January 2023 (UTC)


 * Hello, Mybiryanibykilo, and welcome to Wikipedia. Thanks for your contributions. However, I've reverted your changes, as they contained some errors. Here's a detailed explanation:
 * The Bloomberg link you added did not contain the information present in the previous linked citation, and you removed the Reuters link without providing a replacement. I've instead added archive links to the Wayback Machine for those citations. See WP:Link rot on more details on fixing dead citation links.
 * There shouldn't be a space before citations.
 * The opening previously said that Phattharaphorn has been chairman and CEO since 2012. You edited it to say the company was founded by her in 2012, which is incorrect. It was founded in 1993 by her husband.
 * The title Ms. indicates that Phattharaphorn is a woman (though generally such titles shouldn't be used, according to Wikipedia's WP:Manual of Style). The correct pronoun would have been she, not he.
 * The lead did not say the company has two subsidiaries. It has multiple, with those two given as examples, so your change to say it had two subsidiaries was incorrect.
 * This article was probably suggested to you by the new user experience system. If you ask me, though, random articles on topics you're totally unfamiliar with aren't a really a great starting point for editing Wikipedia. You could instead try looking up some topics you know fairly well, and begin editing from there if you see improvements that could be made. I hope you have good experience here on Wikipedia, and thanks again for joining. --Paul_012 (talk) 04:17, 11 January 2023 (UTC)
 * Hello @Paul 012
 * I sincerely apologize for previous damages that I have unintentionally made.
 * Thanks for making me aware of these flaws, From now onwards, I will focus on contributing to familiar articles only.
 * Thanks again for your guidance Mybiryanibykilo (talk) 10:50, 11 January 2023 (UTC)