Talk:Tabula Rasa (Lost)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 18:40, 16 March 2014 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * "Jack later tells Kate that the past does not matter, they all died when the plane crashed." --> what?
 * "decides to end the marshal's misery by shooting him in the heart." --> remove the verbose. I think it's best to say "decides to kill the Marshal by shooting him in the heart" or something.
 * "He misses and punctures the marshal's lung, putting him in even more pain" use a full stop there.
 * "The episode is called this" --> "The episode received this name"
 * All done! Thanks ! -Newyorkadam (talk) 01:16, 20 March 2014 (UTC)Newyorkadam

I fixed the lead and Production, can you continue the review, ? igordebraga ≠ 13:58, 22 March 2014 (UTC)
 * I will tonight. Thanks!  → Call me  Hahc  21  19:58, 22 March 2014 (UTC)
 * Okay. I took a look at the rest of the article and it all looks perfectly fine. I'm promoting.  → Call me  Hahc  21  16:30, 25 March 2014 (UTC)