Talk:Takaonna

The chief concern with this article may be the numerous grammatical errors and incomplete and confusing sentences. It appears to be a partial English translation. Is there someone who can locate the original text and create a more complete translation with a more clear narrative structure?

Deleting the last section.
The last section of the article seems unnecessary at best, and utterly incomprehensible at its worst. I think it should be deleted, especially because it doesn't have any sources to back it up. For now, I'm going to leave it up while I look for a reliable source that I can use to edit it but to be honest, I don't think it's salvageable. — Preceding unsigned comment added by TromboneCarrot (talk • contribs) 19:28, 2 February 2021 (UTC)

need help
Should we add a section for media featuring Takaonna? RemiruPlushie (talk) 18:08, 17 May 2021 (UTC)