Talk:Take It Off (Kesha song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 08:57, 12 November 2010 (UTC)

I'll put the review on hold now. Adabow (talk · contribs) 09:41, 12 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Good work, I'll pass now. Adabow (talk · contribs) 22:44, 12 November 2010 (UTC)

Lead

 * Mention release and recording details in body of article
 * It is, its covered in Credits and Release, it doesnt need to be put in written form.
 * You need something, a reference at least Adabow (talk · contribs) 22:42, 12 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Sometimes Lukasz Gottwald, sometimes Dr. Luke. Be consistent.
 * I use Lukasz Gottwald twice in the article, once in the Lead and once under Credits, this is so the full name is known.
 * I still don't agree with it, but as the GA reviewer for "Tik Tok" was OK with it I'll let it go. Adabow (talk · contribs) 22:42, 12 November 2010 (UTC)
 * "Other critics felt the song was a strong, irresistible dance pop song strictly made for the dance floor with a great carefree message" - comma after 'dance pop song'
 * Link dance pop. Auto-tune can be linked earlier than it is.
 * Link dance pop. Auto-tune can be linked earlier than it is.

Writing and inspiration

 * This section is quite short. Can I suggest you merge this with the 'Composition' section?
 * '"Take It Off" was written by Kesha, alongside Dr. Luke, and Claude Kelly.' - don't need a comma after Dr. Luke
 * Both issues done.

Composition

 * The header for the audio sample would be better as "Take It Off". Regardless, the title should be enclosed by quote marks.
 * The file is currently reading as 130kbps. Is this the same problem as you had with "Baby"?
 * Audio is lower then original, the Audiowhatever wont let me lower it anymore. Myself and Candyo had the same issue with Baby.
 * "Music reviewer Bill Lamb, commented on..." - don't need a comma after Bill Lamb
 * "Lamb further commented that the lyrics drew similar reference to that of Lady Gaga's commenting," → Lamb further commented that the lyrics were to those of Lady Gaga's, commenting,
 * What about the lyrics are similar to Gaga's?
 * "Lamb further commented that the lyrics drew similar reference to that of Lady Gaga's commenting, "followers of Lady Gaga's Monster Ball Tour will be familiar with this point of view [about free expression].""
 * What about the lyrics are similar to Gaga's?
 * "Lamb further commented that the lyrics drew similar reference to that of Lady Gaga's commenting, "followers of Lady Gaga's Monster Ball Tour will be familiar with this point of view [about free expression].""

Critical reception

 * "He was concerned with the overall lyrical depth and over use of auto-tune but he" - over-use should be hyphenated, comma after auto-tune
 * with the volume turned up and the chorus encouraging you to "take it off," - a quote in a quote should have inverted commas, not two sets of quote marks
 * I dont know what that means :P help?
 * I did it :) Adabow (talk · contribs) 22:16, 12 November 2010 (UTC)
 * "He commented on the choice of the single noting" - comma after 'single'
 * "He went on the give the single" → to give the single
 * Whoopsies,
 * Link BBC
 * Whoopsies,
 * Link BBC

Chart performance

 * I have spotted inconsistencies between this section, the table, and references. Please check all chart positions are accurate throughout.
 * Oops, there was issues with New Zealand in Chart performance, has now been corrected.
 * Ref 10 would look better at end of sentence
 * Link Billboard Hot 100
 * "In Canada, the song ascended and descended the chart for twelve weeks before finally dropping off the chart. On July 13, 2010, the song re-entered..." - give a date when the song first dropped off
 * four-teen should be fourteen
 * Is there a reason why you omit the NZ cert?
 * Was certified after i nominated, didnt think to add it.
 * Is there a reason why you omit the NZ cert?
 * Was certified after i nominated, didnt think to add it.
 * Was certified after i nominated, didnt think to add it.

Music videos

 * Is there only one review of the first video?
 * All i could find unfortunately.
 * Your main source for the second video has a review which is not discussed in the article
 * Yes, but i dont use his for reviews on anything, good for composition and stuff but he's not very neutral, i have yet to read a review where he doesnt call her a drunk slut or something. His reviews arn't neural, if it wasnt published by NYC holding i wouldnt include it at all.

Live performances

 * NBC and Today Show need linking. Today Show needs italics (note: it is called Today or The Today Show, not Today Show)

Credits and personnel

 * Links?
 * ? i think, trying to avoid overlinking