Talk:Take Me Home (Alexandra Stan song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 10:20, 30 May 2020 (UTC)

Will start on this later today; most probable case here. --Kyle Peake (talk) 10:20, 30 May 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Sure you can't find a source for genre(s) to add in the body?
 * The sources on this are limited, there is no website reporting about the genre of this. Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:23, 31 May 2020 (UTC)


 * List as Alexandra Stan under Composer(s), but with no wikilink per WP:OVERLINK
 * "as a single for digital download and streaming" → "for digital download as a single" but keep streaming too if you can add a source for that
 * See my comment on that on the "Sober" GAN. Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:23, 31 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "while the latter acted" → "while the latter served"
 * "Musically, "Take Me Home" has been" → "Musically, the song has been"
 * "Its lyrics find Stan" → "The lyrics of "Take Me Home" find Stan" and start the second para on this sentence
 * Are you sure we need a full introduction of Jonathan Currinn in the lead?
 * This is what you usually do when you only have the review of one critic. Yes. Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:23, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Yes that's fine, but you don't need the ref in the lead too. --Kyle Peake (talk) 07:44, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Alright. Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:49, 31 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "thought that the tracks's theme" → "thought that the theme"
 * "with the single's release" → "with the single release"
 * "it portrays Stan performing" → "the video portrays Stan performing"

Background and composition

 * "while the latter acted" → "while the latter served"
 * "was handled by Andrei Kerestely" → "were handled by Andrei Kerestely"
 * "is credited for providing" → "received credited for providing"
 * The streaming release is not supported by the iTunes ref, only digital download is; either remove the former info or add a ref to verify it.
 * see my comment on "Sober". Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:26, 31 May 2020 (UTC)


 * "has been performed by Stan on several concerts" → "had been performed by Stan at several concerts"
 * "revealed that initially, a more complex production had been planned" → "revealed that a more complex production had initially been planned"
 * "on Stan's wish" → "from Stan's wish"
 * "and also likened it to her own" → "and also likened it to Stan's single"
 * "them at home; "home" is used" → "them at home, with "home" being used"

Music video

 * "An accompanying music video for "Take Me Home", directed" → "A music video for "Take Me Home", directed"
 * "alongside red-white hot pants" → "as well as red-white hot pants"
 * "praised the music video" → "praised the video"
 * "CelebMix's Currinn commended Stan's" → "Currinn commended Stan's"
 * "emotional delivery yet slightly criticized" → "emotional delivery, yet slightly criticized"
 * "close-up shots which made the visual" → "close-up shots that made the music video"

Track listing

 * Good

Release history

 * Same issue here with streaming info
 * See my comment on "Sober". Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:27, 31 May 2020 (UTC)

Final comments and verdict
for now, issues are not too prominent and nothing that you can't fix! --Kyle Peake (talk) 14:52, 30 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much for the review. The issues have been addressed apart from where commented. Greets; Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:30, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅! --Kyle Peake (talk) 08:30, 31 May 2020 (UTC)