Talk:Taking Chances/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: - (CK)Lakeshade  -  talk2me  - 23:15, 30 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Id say about 90% of the article is WP:OR
 * MOS violation everywhere; WP:MOS WP:MOS, WP:MOS and many more violations.
 * WP:LEAD lacks structure, flow and clarity. No references in the lead please.
 * Overall weak prose lacking proper structure, grammar, and punctuation.
 * Unreliable references, unformatted references ect ect...

9 edits were made to this article and no effort was put into it. Its far from GA. I think this is the 4th article ive failed from you, stop nominating them please. - (CK)Lakeshade  -  talk2me  - 23:15, 30 June 2011 (UTC)