Talk:Talent agent/Archives/2012

Cleanup
Written partially in the second-person and with some noticeable typographical and grammatical errors. 74.134.94.16 05:09, 5 October 2006 (UTC)

The article was confusing, scattered and contained errors. I've made some corrections, deleted some problematic passages and added some new information but more contributions are still needed to create a cohesive article.Mfalber 00:24, 5 January 2007 (UTC)

I did some more work on it, but I will come back later to improve. - Cbradshaw 05:01, 10 October 2007 (UTC)

Wow, no mention of any work having been done to clean this up in over four years. I will try to come back to this article later, as it is badly in need of formatting and cleanup. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 144.202.243.12 (talk) 15:38, 27 April 2012 (UTC)

Cruise ship agents
I moved and edited these edits to comply with our guidelines and policies and to keep our sections focused on their titles. The addition is also not about music agents, but about general talent agents who focus on cruise ship placements. As such I believe it's placement in the Music Agents section is inappropriate and I have moved it to a new section of its own. The inclusion of non-citation external links in the body of an article generally falls foul of our manual of style, and in this case is simply promotional - there is no encyclopedic value to listing the two mentioned service providers. I've deleted the sentence that simply lists the agents. If there is disagreement that my edits do not improve the article please discuss them here rather than reverting without comment. Thanks -- SiobhanHansa 18:47, 24 August 2007 (UTC)

Paradigm
I'd like to suggest changing the internal link for Paradigm in the footer box to link to Sam Gores since there is not yet a Paradigm Agency wiki. This would lead readers to the Chairman and CEO of Paradigm rather than the definition of the word Paradigm. --Sima (talk) 21:27, 8 October 2009 (UTC)

Split the article
I suggest this page be a general page about talent agents and that the various subsections become their own pages with cross-references to the other ones. Right now it's way long and feels very scattershot. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 144.202.243.12 (talk) 15:45, 27 April 2012 (UTC)