Talk:Tales of a Third Grade Nothing/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 05:16, 8 October 2012 (UTC)

That's all. Sorry about the half-month delay. Real-life got in the way. On hold for seven days.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   19:01, 21 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Infobox: Production code cite?
 * Lede: I'm not sure reference 1 is really needed
 * Lede: After the initial 'also voiced by MacFarlane', just go straight to '(MacFarlane)'
 * Lede: "both in their firsts in the Family Guy series" This doesn't make much sense. Try "their firsts for the Family Guy series"
 * Lede: Comma after 'Besides Sinatra…"
 * Lede: 'TV' -> 'television'
 * Plot: Just a quick question… Is the proper capitalization for the club "pLace", or is that a typo? If so, add [sic]
 * Production: Change the parenthetical 'Stew-Roids' fact into a separate sentence.
 * Prouduction: Switch the last two refs in the second paragraph so that it goes [2][6]. It just looks prettier. ;)
 * Reception: Explain what a Nielsen rating is (like you did on the others)
 * Reception: Italicize AV Club
 * References: Use consistent dating styles
 * Refs 3 and 6 should use en-dashes (–) instead of dashes (-)
 * There's some double parenthesis in Refs 7 and 8
 * References: Ref 2, 3 and 6's publishers should be Yahoo! TV
 * References: Cut the 'Yahoo! TV' part of the title out of Refs 2, 3, and 6
 * References: Italicize The AV Club in 9
 * References: Ref 10's publisher should be Zap2it (linked), and the work should be TV by the Numbers (also linked)
 * Categories: Alphabetize these bad boys.
 * Fixed your concerns. Pedro J.  the rookie 21:15, 21 October 2012 (UTC)