Talk:Tan Kah Kee MRT station/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 10:24, 22 March 2021 (UTC)

Comments That's all I  have, so it's on hold for now. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 18:50, 22 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "to its present name through" -> "to Tan Kah Kee"
 * ""as the name was viewed" -> "as it was viewed"
 * "misleading" could you give us a clue in the lead as to why?
 * "Bus, Taxi" ->"Bus, taxi"
 * "at a sum of" value
 * "US$240.66 million" 1 decimal place is fine.
 * "have to be" had to be.
 * "t was initially considered to underpin the gateways" -> "Underpinning the gateways was initially considered..."
 * "in Q4 2012" in the fourth quarter of 2012
 * "contractor had assured that it would finish the construction" this is obvious unless you mean they assured that after going into insolvency?
 * ✅ replaced to: as the construction was going well by then
 * "As the LTA seek for a new contractor, the contractor for Beauty World station," unclear, repetitive, link?
 * "400 workers affected..." avoid starting sentences with a numeral.
 * "US$177.42" no decimal places here.
 * "was raised by" increased.
 * "breakers, to break up" repetitive.
 * "works completed by 95%" -> "works 95% complete."
 * "segment will open on" would.
 * "other DTL Stage 2 stations" -> DTL2
 * "Exit A of this station" -> "Exit A of Tan Kah Kee station"
 * "a road nearby." -> "a nearby road"
 * "it has the" had
 * "Then principal of the school" hyphenate.
 * "congratulated the station name" you normally  congratulate someone.
 * ✅ replaced with "praise"
 * "most votes through the voting system" no need for "through the voting system"
 * "Road[1] and" move to behind punctuation.
 * List of schools here is different from that in the lead, and some linked, some not.
 * Well in the body there are more schools mentioned than those in the lead.
 * Link headways.
 * "be a grand yet compelling structure, to reflect the youthful ingenuity" etc etc brochure speak, needs copyedit.
 * ✅ by
 * Plenty of spaced hyphens, should be en-dashes.
 * Ref 8 doesn't link Straits Times but ref 11 does...
 * Ref 35 is LTA ref 35 is lta.gov.sg etc
 * ✅ replaced all to Land Transport Authority
 * Ref 24 it's a work not a publisher.
 * Ref 41 should be pp.
 * whats pp?
 * This. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 10:29, 24 March 2021 (UTC)
 * "it has the" had
 * "Then principal of the school" hyphenate.
 * "congratulated the station name" you normally  congratulate someone.
 * ✅ replaced with "praise"
 * "most votes through the voting system" no need for "through the voting system"
 * "Road[1] and" move to behind punctuation.
 * List of schools here is different from that in the lead, and some linked, some not.
 * Well in the body there are more schools mentioned than those in the lead.
 * Link headways.
 * "be a grand yet compelling structure, to reflect the youthful ingenuity" etc etc brochure speak, needs copyedit.
 * ✅ by
 * Plenty of spaced hyphens, should be en-dashes.
 * Ref 8 doesn't link Straits Times but ref 11 does...
 * Ref 35 is LTA ref 35 is lta.gov.sg etc
 * ✅ replaced all to Land Transport Authority
 * Ref 24 it's a work not a publisher.
 * Ref 41 should be pp.
 * whats pp?
 * This. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 10:29, 24 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Ref 35 is LTA ref 35 is lta.gov.sg etc
 * ✅ replaced all to Land Transport Authority
 * Ref 24 it's a work not a publisher.
 * Ref 41 should be pp.
 * whats pp?
 * This. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 10:29, 24 March 2021 (UTC)
 * whats pp?
 * This. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 10:29, 24 March 2021 (UTC)

Addressed most of the points above.--ZKang123 (talk) 02:11, 24 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Note [A] needs to be referenced. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 10:31, 24 March 2021 (UTC)
 * just this last point... The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!&#33;!&#33;) 10:12, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Ok done.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:42, 27 March 2021 (UTC)