Talk:Targit (company)

I noticed how TARGIT was not mentioned in: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Business_intelligence_tools

I started writing an article about the company and I do believe I have refered to credible, independent sources in the article. The article and the content of it does not differ from many of the other articles listed in: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Business_intelligence_tools

I will go through it again, but would like to specifically what is wrong. If the title sounds like advertising, I can change it into "TARGIT A/S" since "TARGIT" is taken. But the A/S is a Danish acronym for Limited Company/Inc.

Stemmen 14:43, 16 February 2011 (UTC)

Just edited the text

Stemmen 14:53, 16 February 2011 (UTC)


 * I've made a copyedit pass and removed anything overtly promotional. I'd suggest changing some of the Gartner quotes to prose (too many long, direct quotes becomes a problem) and including some of the balancing information from the same source.  Will do this if I get a chance later.  Kuru   (talk)  16:53, 16 February 2011 (UTC)