Talk:Tartit

Wording
This article sounds as if it is a review of the group. It uses several flourishes that definitely do not feel like an encyclopedia, is that really an acceptable format? —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Asthmatickitty (talk • contribs).

Agreed, "Their lyrics are expressions of hope, peace and expose the power of life." should be omitted unless the author wishes to provide a citation. Dmmm23 (talk) 02:38, 13 August 2008 (UTC)