Talk:Tavistock House

Inappropriate use of sources?
Too much close paraphrasing of sources may have us in copyvio territory. Eg:
 * Source: "Here he wrote Bleak House, Hard Times, Little Dorrit and A Tale of Two Cities, and it was here he put on the amateur theatricals which are described in John Forster's Life of Charles Dickens" ('Tavistock House', Survey of London: volume 21: The parish of St Pancras part 3: Tottenham Court Road & neighbourhood (1949), pp. 99-100)
 * Article: "Here he wrote Bleak House, Hard Times, and Little Dorrit, and it was here he got up the amateur theatricals which are described in Forster's Life of Charles Dickens."
 * Source: "Burton obtained leases, from the Duke of Bedford, of two plots of ground adjoining the gardens of the houses that formed the east side of Tavistock Square." ('Tavistock House', Survey of London: volume 21: The parish of St Pancras part 3: Tottenham Court Road & neighbourhood (1949), pp. 99-100)
 * Article: "Burton obtained leases from Francis Russell, 5th Duke of Bedford, of two plots of ground adjoining the gardens of the houses on the east side of Tavistock Square."
 * Source: "Dickens converted the house's large schoolroom into "The Smallest Theatre in the World." " (http://www.victorianweb.org/authors/dickens/gallery/30.html)
 * Article: Dickens converted the Tavistock House's large schoolroom into "The Smallest Theatre in the World".
 * In the latter case, the presence of an ungrammatical "the" suggests copying and pasting from sources, followed by minor modification. hamiltonstone (talk) 22:12, 19 January 2010 (UTC)

More
The examples i provided were just examples. So here are more still in the article:
 * Source: "The first such play presented there during his first Twelfth Night entertainments the burlesque Guy Fawkes by Alfred Smith."
 * Article: "The first play presented there during Dickens' first Twelfth Night entertainments was the burlesque Guy Fawkes by Alfred Smith."
 * Source: "The lease of the southern plot was dated 8th May, 1800, and was for 98 years from Christmas, 1795."
 * Article: "The lease of the southern plot was dated 8th May, 1800, and was for 98 years from Christmas, 1795."
 * Please, if you are quoting verbatim, put quote marks round the quoted material. The whole article needs to be gone through. hamiltonstone (talk) 22:32, 20 January 2010 (UTC)