Talk:Tawang Monastery/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 21:27, 14 August 2015 (UTC)

Will start soon.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 21:27, 14 August 2015 (UTC)
 * A few comments for now:
 * Please reorder citations that look like this "[1][24][13]"


 * Had to reorder twice due to some technical glitch


 * Last sentence in article lacks a full stop.


 * Lst sentences have been deleted as they were posted by some other user


 * Last couple sentences in the article lacks a citation


 * Last sentence without citation deleted


 * Why does it have "tourism website" on the bottom of the page?


 * Some other user has added this much later than my posting the artcile for GAN. Te sentences stand deleted now.


 * The last sentence is a travel suggestion. I'm pretty sure that falls evenly into "What Wikipedia is not".


 * Some other user has added this much later than my posting the artcile for GAN. Te sentences stand deleted now.


 * What source does the "Shakya 2012" cite point to?


 * Over sight miss. Now fixed reference with correct page number

--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 11:56, 17 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review. I have addressed all above issues. Any other suggestions welcome.-- Nvvchar . 13:56, 17 August 2015 (UTC)


 * Two last comments:
 * Please use AmE or BrE, not both. Examples include "centre, honour, travelled" vs "meter, defense and -ization".--Tomandjerry211 (alt)talk) 14:32, 17 August 2015 (UTC)


 * Hopefully I have done it wherever I could locate in the text.


 * Last sentence in "Features" section requires citation.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 14:32, 17 August 2015 (UTC)


 * Cited now


 * Thanks for the final comments. I hope I have complied fully.-- Nvvchar . 02:04, 18 August 2015 (UTC)


 * Passing, Well done.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 10:58, 18 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks you very much for approving this GAN. Every time you approve I have to make a request to leave message of its approval on my talk page as the auto bot does not work on my page.-- Nvvchar . 00:28, 19 August 2015 (UTC)