Talk:Technophobia/GA2

GA Review
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Hi, it's me again. This article did not address the points I raised in the last review, so I will re-iterate some of the points below:


 * Format references according to WP:CITE/ES. They must include the publisher and access date; this includes footnotes. I suggest using cite web to do this. The references that are not used inline are not really useful because they do not show which information they are referencing.
 * Expand the lead per WP:LEAD. The lead section should be a summary of the entire article rather than simply an introduction; right now, it is far too short.

Please address these issues and respond here to update me on its progress. Gary King ( talk ) 16:43, 28 July 2008 (UTC)
 * A useful tool that eases the use of citation templates: . --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus 18:06, 28 July 2008 (UTC)


 * Because there has been no response in seven days, this article has failed its Good article nomination. Gary King ( talk ) 04:51, 6 August 2008 (UTC)