Talk:Teesside Fettlers

Some suggestions
— Preceding unsigned comment added by Orangemike (talk • contribs) 16:04, 4 January 2008‎ (UTC)
 * 1. What is the North East? Wikilinking is all well and good, but piping the term with text that makes sense to Yanks, Kiwis, Gujaratis, Iraqis, etc. would be useful.
 * 2. Avoid peacock words about "beautiful countryside," "enjoyable experience" and the like. This is an impartial description, not an ad.
 * 3. Don't capitalize terms like 'ceilidh' and 'banjo.'
 * 4. Italicize album titles.
 * 4a. Who released the albums? Are they self-produced? If not, what label were they on?
 * 5. The article very badly needs links to impartial, reliable outside sources, not just to the band's website, members' websites, etc.