Talk:Tekken: Bloodline

GOCE Copyedit
I've identified a few issues that should be addressed in the article by someone familiar with the subject: An editor familiar with the subject should definitely take another look at the article to make sure all of the information is accurate. I had to make some rather large guesses at what the original text was trying to convey and while I believe I've verified the accuracy of my statements through Google searches, it should definitely be reviewed. Please let me know if you have any comments or questions. AviationFreak💬 18:12, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Who is "King" in the last sentence of the 2nd paragraph in the synopsis?
 * YouTube is being used as a source, which is generally not considered a reliable source.
 * - Why would we rely on the producers to tell us how the trailers were received? Is there no other source that contains a review based on the trailers?


 * Thanks for the copyedit. About some points your mark though:


 * The Youtube video is an upload from Netflix.
 * About the producers' early comments in regards to how about they were received, how about moving them to the reception section?Tintor2 (talk) 19:01, 21 October 2022 (UTC)
 * Moving the comments to the reception section would be fine, but I still think there had ought to be a better source out there on the trailers' reception if we're going to mention it in the article. I also have taken a slightly closer look at the referencing and much of it seems to be from Twitter. This is a primary source and therefore generally is not suitable as a reference. I also removed some details about character design that didn't appear to be sourced and are almost certainly just minor trivia not notable enough for inclusion in the article. Linkedin is not a reliable source either, for similar reasons.
 * The article is not clear on what "campy" fighters are.
 * The phrase is confusing and a reader who is unfamiliar with these series will not understand what is being conveyed.
 * See above comments about sourcing. Unless alternative sources can be found for the material in the article, information sourced to unreliable sources will need to be removed.
 * I've finished the copyedit, but as we've been discussing there are a few more problems that the article has. If you'd like a helping hand in resolving these issues, I'd suggest putting a request in at the Anime and Manga Wikiproject. I hope I've been a help! AviationFreak💬 19:47, 21 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Thanks for the copyedit. I'll try to solve the issues you pointed.Tintor2 (talk) 19:54, 21 October 2022 (UTC)