Talk:Temiar Language

Hi John, My name is Sam Delagrange, sammyd840, and I peer reviewed your article. So far you have some great information on the language and a decent structure for the article. However, there were many grammatical errors and many run on sentences. I reworded some of the odd sounding sentences and slip some into multiple sentences. One structural change that I made was that you had the Alternative names under the Geographical Distribution heading. This didn't really fit under that heading, and because there was only one sentence about the alternative names I added it right into the lead section. Another structural change was the creation of the History heading. Previously, you had information about the history and related languages under the Sounds/Phonology heading. This didn't fit well into the phonology heading, so I created a History heading right underneath and filled in the information. I hope that these changes help you while you create the final article. Good luck John!