Talk:Tempest (Denning novel)

Inappropriate language in article
Someone inserted the term "pubic hair" in between the words "rebellious" and "worlds," but I can't seem to edit it out.

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BetacommandBot (talk) 08:32, 15 January 2008 (UTC)

I rewrote the plot section
It -seemed- to be wordage taken directly from the back of the book but I cannot confirm that at the moment because I lost my copy. So I took what was confirmed in the marketing speak present, mixed in a bit of boldness and recollection and rewrote the whole danged thing in what I hope is a more appropiate tone and style for Wikipedia. Lots42 (talk) 22:34, 15 January 2009 (UTC)

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