Talk:Templario/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 12:11, 11 April 2020 (UTC)

Will be conducting this review as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 12:11, 11 April 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * Templario's nationality is missing from the lead
 * "It is uncertain exactly when Templario made his professional wrestling career and if he has used a different ring name before adopting the "Templario" 'name" - repetition of the word "name"
 * "around 2012/2013." - around 2012 to 2013.
 * Wikilink independent circuit

Professional wrestling career

 * Wikilink Calpulalpan and Pachuca
 * "where he struck up a friendship with" - more concise; where he began a friendship with

Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre (2016–present)

 * Wikilink independent circuit
 * "when CMLL does not require them for a show" - does not require them to partake in a show
 * "and Latigo and Trauma I in the semi-finals." - semifinals
 * "Templario was involved in a multi-man steel cage match where the loser of the match would be forced to unmask." - repetition of the word "match"
 * "saw Templario escape the cage as the seventh man," - the seventh man to do so?

Los Guerreros Laguneros (2018–present)

 * "but was the tenth man eliminated as he was pinned by Volador Jr" - he was the tenth wrestler to be eliminated
 * "Templario competed in the 2019 Reyes del Aire tournament, marking his participation in the annual tournament for the first time." - repetition of the word "tournament"
 * "Templario started out by winning the 2020 Reyes del Aire lastly eliminating Star Jr." - think you want to add that this was the final of that tournament

United States independent circuit (2019–present)

 * "on a show in Pittsburg, Pennsylvania" - typo; should be Pittsburgh and wikilink the city and also the state of Pennysylvania
 * "as part of ROH's Summer Supercard pay-per-view." - think there is something missing at the end of this sentence
 * Wikilink Chicago and Illinois
 * "on September 1, 2019, and defeating Jake Lander on their December 2019 show." - try not to repeat the year in the same sentence