Talk:Temple of the Five Immortals (Shiyan)

Tone
This article is written in a rather unencyclopedic tone. It should be edited to cut out the personal opinion and focus on plainly describing the temple and its history. --Difference engine (talk) 01:25, 7 March 2015 (UTC)

Unclear reference to "war"
Hello,

There is a line in the text that goes as follows: "People who were seeking refuge from the war fled to this fortress". Which war? Or should this be "seeking refuge from war"?

Thanks,

--NorthWu (talk) 16:31, 21 April 2022 (UTC)