Talk:Tenchu: Shadow Assassins

Plot Summary
Can someone who knows the plot of this game fix the pronouns and syntax in this section to make it make sense?

"Ayame had actually succeeded in rescuing the princess but had been attacked by someone who seemed to be Rikimaru, but was actually Rinshi in disguise. She then flees the castle as Rikimaru arrives and tries to take her to a hideout."

It seems like "She" means Rinshi and "Her" means Princess Kiku but I am not familiar enough with the game to fix this for sure. WesUGAdawg (talk) 23:20, 6 November 2009 (UTC)


 * My mistake, I fixed it now. --142.213.254.2 (talk) 13:54, 25 June 2010 (UTC)

Expand the plot?
A template says we should expand the plot section, but I don't know what to add without going in way too much detais. The Wikipedia guidelines recommends a plot section of about 400-700 words, and this one is currently 396 or so. This is really not that far, and besides this game is fairly short and has a relatively simple storyline, so unless anyone has any good reason to leave it there, I'm removing the template. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 142.213.254.2 (talk) 14:06, 25 June 2010 (UTC)

Sorry, forgot to sign my comment. Also, I rephrased the last sentence, so now it's 400 words exactly, no need to expand anymore :) --142.213.254.2 (talk) 14:24, 25 June 2010 (UTC)