Talk:Teresa Hsu/GA1

GA Review
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Hello. I will be doing the Good Article review for this article. Here are some things I think need improving:
 * "7 July 1897" - link full dates --> "7 July 1897"
 * ✅. -- Aldwinteo (talk) 03:35, 5 June 2008 (UTC)


 * "didn't" - spell out all contractions --> "did not"
 * ✅. -- Aldwinteo (talk) 03:35, 5 June 2008 (UTC)


 * "When Hsu was young, her father walked out on the family for another woman." - source?
 * "In her mid-50s, she decided to return home to Penang to be with her mother." - source that was the reason?
 * ✅: Yup, the relevant source was provided earlier but was mistakenly placed on a line after. Pse see diff for details. -- Aldwinteo (talk) 03:35, 5 June 2008 (UTC)


 * "The Rotary Club agreed to finance the home on condition that the club take over the running of it. The sisters handed the deeds over to the Society for the Aged Sick, an association formed by the Rotary Club members. The society built three blocks to house the increasing residents and Hsu remained the home's matron until 1980, when she was asked to retire at 83." - source for these sentences?
 * ✅: Same reason as above. Pse see diff for details. -- Aldwinteo (talk) 03:35, 5 June 2008 (UTC)

That's it. The article will be on hold for seven days to allow for improvements. Nikki 311  00:52, 5 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the suggested touch-ups. -- Aldwinteo (talk) 03:35, 5 June 2008 (UTC)
 * No problem. Everything has been addressed, so I'm passing the article. Good job. Nikki  311  20:05, 9 June 2008 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the review & for passing this article to GA status. 8-) -- Aldwinteo (talk) 01:59, 10 June 2008 (UTC)