Talk:Terma (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: --Gen. Quon (talk) 16:34, 26 February 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * What is the tag line changed to? Maybe add that in to intro lead
 * I would cite the guest stars
 * "Scully and assistant director Walter Skinner (Mitch Pileggi) had been detained by a United States Senate committee seeking to uncover Mulder's whereabouts, which is adjourned upon Mulder's arrival." clunky grammar rewrite into "Scully and assistant director Walter Skinner (Mitch Pileggi) had been detained by a United States Senate committee seeking to uncover Mulder's whereabouts, but the committee was adjourned upon Mulder's arrival."
 * "Actor Nicholas Lea who plays recurring character Alex Krycek," Comma needed after 'Lea'
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * On hold for 7 days to straighten out the issues.--Gen. Quon (talk) 16:40, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Think I've got everything you've mentioned. I didn't have the Meisler book on hand to give an accurate page listing for the guest stars, but it is somewhere within that range, which I know covered both "Tunguska" and "Terma". If you want to wait a day til I get back to my bookshelf and narrow that range down then that's perfectly cool. Thanks for taking the time to review this. GRAPPLE   X  01:28, 27 February 2012 (UTC)
 * I checked in mine and made a small change. It's all good now! I pass! No problem, it's good to get these all reviewed.--Gen. Quon (talk) 18:28, 27 February 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * On hold for 7 days to straighten out the issues.--Gen. Quon (talk) 16:40, 26 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Think I've got everything you've mentioned. I didn't have the Meisler book on hand to give an accurate page listing for the guest stars, but it is somewhere within that range, which I know covered both "Tunguska" and "Terma". If you want to wait a day til I get back to my bookshelf and narrow that range down then that's perfectly cool. Thanks for taking the time to review this. GRAPPLE   X  01:28, 27 February 2012 (UTC)
 * I checked in mine and made a small change. It's all good now! I pass! No problem, it's good to get these all reviewed.--Gen. Quon (talk) 18:28, 27 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Think I've got everything you've mentioned. I didn't have the Meisler book on hand to give an accurate page listing for the guest stars, but it is somewhere within that range, which I know covered both "Tunguska" and "Terma". If you want to wait a day til I get back to my bookshelf and narrow that range down then that's perfectly cool. Thanks for taking the time to review this. GRAPPLE   X  01:28, 27 February 2012 (UTC)
 * I checked in mine and made a small change. It's all good now! I pass! No problem, it's good to get these all reviewed.--Gen. Quon (talk) 18:28, 27 February 2012 (UTC)