Talk:Terri Schiavo case/Archive 1

Background on Terri
'''I am disappointed that even on Wikipedia, people without any objectiveness are attempting to "edit" an article that should be based only on facts. As I read through the suggested "edits" it was obvious that they should be more corectly viewed as agendas. It is time for all of you to replace your will with the compassion and grace that Terri Schiavo deserves.'''

One thing I noticed was missing was that there isn't any information on Terri's life prior to Feb 25, 1990 when she suffered brain damage. If a background section could be done while maintaining NPOV it would provide a more complete picture of Terri Schiavo.

It's over and done with now. Let her rest.

NPOV?
Since assisted nutrition and hydration were not considered medical treatment when this woman collapsed, I think trying to remove it from her now is a deprivation of her rights. This case is a wake up call to everyone to put in writing the types of treatment they think they would like to continue if they become incapacitated. Don't assume you can trust someone to carry out your wishes if they include being nourished. Write it down and make sure your family and friends know.

I think this page is awfully slanted towards the 'right to life' side of the debate with authoritative and definative statments of her cognitive abilities wich are disputed and have not been proven in court. --Lazarias 01:15, 23 Feb 2005 (UTC)

Even 100 years ago this would have been a non-issue, because someone in a case similar to Terri's would have died if not on the same day they had the heart attack, within a few days of the heart attack. JesseG 20:16, Mar 7, 2005 (UTC)

Changes
I made some changes to the article due to the fact that I doubt that those who support Terri's feeding tube staying where it is and those who support removal could be split right down the liberal/conservative line. I felt that the lines as originally written had NPOV concerns. What was in there previously was,

Liberal "right to die" activists contend that "living in a vegetative state isn't truly living," and support the ability of the estranged husband to control the destiny of his wife. Conservative "pro-life" activists protest for Terri's "right to live."

I removed the liberal "right to die" and the conservative "right to live" references. JesseG 06:10, Feb 24, 2005 (UTC)

Wow, this thing had a SEVERE pro-death bias, and a lot of factual inaccuracies. I've tried to fix it:

Corrections:

1) I changed "taken off life support" to "starved to death," to make the opening sentence truthful.

Terri is not on life support -- a feeding tube is not "life support." "designed to ... maintain breathing, heartbeat, and other vital functions in somebody who is seriously ill"

Michael Schiavo seeks to deny her nutrition/hydration by ANY means. The last time he succeeded in having her feeding tube removed, he also refused to allow her family to try to feed her orally. He wants her starved to death.

2) Changed for NPOV (balanced Michael Schiavo's claim with family's counter-claim):

Changed: "Micheal... contends that she is "a vegetable" and would not wish to live in that state.  Her family (parents and siblings) contest that claim."

To: "Michael... contends that she is "a vegetable" and would not wish to live in that state.  Her family (parents and siblings) contest that claim.  They say she is responsive and in no discomfort, that her condition does not meet the medical definition of a "vegetative state," and that she would not wish to be killed."

3) Changed factually inaccurate (and severely POV) phrase "that Terri should be allowed to die" to NPOV "that Terri's life should be ended"

Terri has not been offered the choice of living or dying, so it is factually inaccurate to say that starving or dehydrating her to death is "allowing" her to die.

4) Changed for NPOV (balanced Michael Schiavo's claim with faimily's counter-claim / undid Gwynne's vandalism):

Changed: "The cause of her collapse is a controversial subject. At the time of her collapse, the couple was having marital problems.  Michael Schiavo's contention is that she suffered a heart attack because of chemical imbalance brought on by an eating disorder."

So, thanks to Gwynne's deletion of the family's side, the reader is left wondering, "what is the controversy?" Only one side is presented. So I added the other side, for balance:

The cause of her collapse is a controversial subject. At the time of her collapse, the couple was having marital problems. Michael Schiavo's contention is that she suffered a heart attack because of chemical imbalance brought on by an eating disorder. However, there is no physiological evidence that she suffered a heart attack. Some members of Terri's family think she might have been asphyxiated or otherwise assaulted by her husband. However, there is no forensic evidence of an assault.

5) Changed PVS argument for NPOV (balanced Michael Schiavo's claim with family's counter-claim & dictionary definition):

Changed: Michael contends that she is in a Persistent Vegetative State (PVS), which Terri's family disputes.

To: Michael contends that she is in a Persistent Vegetative State (PVS), but Terri's family says that she does not meet the medical definition of "vegetative." (According to Stedman's Online Medical Dictionary, a vegetative state is "a state of grossly impaired consciousness, as after severe head trauma or brain disease, in which an individual is incapable of voluntary or purposeful acts and only responds reflexively to painful stimuli.")

6) Removed POV caveats from factual statement:

Changed: Terri's family contends that she is not in a coma or on life-support.

To: She is not in a coma or on life-support.

She is certainly not in a coma or on life-support; that is indisputable.

7) Removed this outrageous POV sentence, which was inserted by JnB987:

"These actions, however, have been dismissed by a court-ordered doctor as reflexes and the family has been accused of exaggerating them for their own exploitation."

What "court-ordered doctor," who is accusing, and what does "for [the family's] own exploitation" even mean? Exploit is a transitive verb: who is alleged to have been exploited, and how? Her family loves her, unconditionally, and they are trying to protect her from being murdered. If JnB987 thinks that is "exploitation," then I feel very sorry for him.

Terri's family has doctors who say that her condition could improve substantially with rehabilitative care; when arguing for a big medical malpractice settlement, to cover the cost of that care, Michael agreed. But now that he stands to inherit the money when she dies, he refuses to permit her to receive that rehabilitative care that the money was supposed to pay for. THAT is exploitation!

8) Corrected pro-death POV manipulation family's statement:

Changed: However, her family disputes that, saying that while they were not present during the conversations she had with her husband, Terri is a devout Roman Catholic whom they believe would not wish to violate the Church's teachings on euthanasia and suicide by intentionally starving or dehydrating herself to death.

To: However, her family disputes that, saying that Terri is a devout Roman Catholic who would not wish to violate the Church's teachings on euthanasia and suicide by intentionally starving or dehydrating herself to death.

When telling what the family says, you should not insert a bunch of waffle words that they never use.

9) Restored Gwynne's deletion (vandalism):

Terri's family also points out that Michael apparently did not recall those conversations immediately after Terri's collapse. It was only several years later, after Terri received more than $1 million in legal settlements to cover the cost of her long term care and rehabilitation, that Michael first claimed to remember conversations in which Terri expressed a wish to die rather than live in the condition in which she now finds herself. If she dies, Michael will inherit whatever remains of that money.

The accuracy of that paragraph is undisputed, and important for understanding the case.

10) Restored Gwynne's deletion (vandalism):

Hospice is SUPPOSED to be ONLY for terminal patients. Reputable hospices should not accept patients who are not terminal. Hence it is important to note that Terri's condition is not terminal:

Changed: He had Terri placed in hospice.

Back to: He had Terri placed in hospice, though her condition is not terminal.

11) Restored Gwynne's deletion (vandalism):

"Michael could legally cede guardianship to Terri's parents, but refuses to do so, claiming he is doing what is best for her. Her parents want to bring her home; they maintain that, with therapy, their daughter can be helped."

There's no disputing the accuracy of that sentence, and it is necessary to answer the obvious question of where SHOULD she be, if not in hospice.

NCdave 16:22, 24 Feb 2005 (UTC)

Sorry to say NCDave, but the article is much more POV now than it was before.

As for the PVS/not in a coma claim, can we just settle the impossible argument we're having by saying "The Court has repeatedly found that Terri is in a PVS, a finding her family still disputes." -JnB987


 * So, JNB987, you would like to mention a series of court rulings that were so transparently dishonest, and so outrageous to basic decency, and so infuriating to the public at large, that a special session of the legislature -- called solely for the purpose of reversing the court's misbehavior -- passed a special law just to protect this poor woman from the abuse of those courts -- and your "neutral" way of summarizing that astonishing indictment of those rulings is to say, "a finding her family still disputes"? You are outrageous!


 * So, NCdave, you in turn would like to mention a series of legislative decisions which were equally transparently dishonest, and so outrageous to basic decency, and so infuriating to the public at large, that they were determined to be unconstitutional and struck down by a higher court? Call me POV, but I prefer the official judiciary stance of the non-partisan court over the legislative manipulations of a very partisan state legislature.


 * Call me old fashioned, but I prefer laws to be made with the consent of the governed. Every American should.  If you do not, then you have rejected the single most foundational principle of our system of government, and you should go and live somewhere else.  "With the consent of the governed" means that our laws should be written through the democratic process, by our elected representatives, who have been authorized by us to write those laws.  That means the legislature, not the courts.  Courts are NEVER supposed to make laws, only interpret them.  When they make laws instead of interpret them, it is called judicial activism, or simply "tyranny."  As Thomas Jefferson famously wrote, "One single object... [will merit] the endless gratitude of society: that of restraining the judges from usurping legislation."


 * JNB987, do you know what the word "unconstitutional" means? It means "irreconcilably inconsistent with (contradicted by) a provision of either the State or U.S. Constitution."  If you read "Terri's Law" you will see that it has absolutely nothing at all to do with anyone's "privacy."  Yet the notoriously activist Judge Baird and the infamously activist all-Democrat/all-leftist FL Supreme Court voided Terri's law for violating the "separation of powers" of the government of Florida -- a finding that was not only unsupported by the meaning and intent of the FL Constitution, but also positively breathtaking in its chutzpah, considering that Court's record of legislating from the bench.  (In other words, the court lied.)


 * Take a 'look at the list of organizations that lined up with Terri's family, supporting Terri's Law with Amici Curiae briefs:
 * Center for Human Life and Bioethics at the Family Research Council, Not Dead Yet, Adapt, The ARC of the United States, Center on Human Policy, Syracuse University, Center on Self Determination, Disability Rights Center, Freedom Clearinghouse, Hospice Patients' Alliance, Mouth Magazine, National Council on Independent Living, National Disabled Students Union, National Spinal Cord Injury Association, Self-Advocates Becoming Empowered, Society for Disability Studies, TASH, World Association of Persons With Disabilities and World Institute on Disability, Academy of Florida Elder Law Attorneys, Inc., the National Academy of Elder Law Attorneys, and 55 Bioethicists. -NCdave


 * Compare that to the folks supporting her death: the far-left ACLU, and Michael's euthanasia-advocate lawyer, Felos. Period.


 * Do you see a problem? Are you sure that ALL those organizations are wrong about the law, and about Terri's life? -NCdave


 * The only NPOV way to handle the argument over whether she is or is not in a PVS is to contrast the medical definition to her actual symptoms, and let the reader decide who's right. Deleting those simple facts does NOT make the article NPOV, it makes it incomplete. -NCdave


 * Yes I agree. So let us say that her symptoms have been diagnosed by an independent, court-ordered doctor as being "reflexes"! It is hypocrisy to claim that I am leaving out facts when you have very conveniently left one out yourself.


 * You can pretend what you wish, but the FACT is that ALL these medical experts have testified in court that Terri could improve with therapy: Dr. William Hammesfahr, Dr. Alexander Gimon, Dr. Jacob Greene, Dr. Richard Neubauer, Dr. William Russell, Dr. Jay Carpenter, Dr. James Avery, Dr. John D. Young, Dr. William Maxfield, Sarah Green Mele - Speech Pathologist, Myra Stinson - Speech Pathologist. If you are right, then ALL of them are wrong.  -NCdave


 * However, as you say, it is true that the courts have ruled that she is in a PVS (so far, anyhow), so I've added that fact to the (de-vandalized) article, for completeness. NCdave 06:34, 26 Feb 2005 (UTC)

It's hard to stay impartial while stating facts, but sometimes giving too much of one side of the facts is impartial, NCDave. -JnB987


 * I can see that you don't like facts, JnB987, but they are stubborn things, and they just won't go away because there are too many of them for your taste. Facts don't have "sides."  They simply are.  POV bias creeps in when you selectively omit some of them to paint an incomplete picture, or when you adorn them with opinion-expressing adjectives.


 * Facts do not have sides, NCdave, you are right about that. But we have sides. And you have consistently shown yours as I have shown mine. However, we must realize that there is a middle ground here, neither of us is completely correct. However, what must be written here is an impartial (read: no emotion, no inflection, no bias... I'm sure you understand) telling of the facts. All of the facts. Have I left anything out? Yes. But I left things out because they were unimportant (the anecdote about the Communion which is clearly pandering to the Christian audience.) Opinion-expressing adjectives must be eliminated. The example you give below is good, but the problem is it' still not NPOV. Let me explain: "Michael wants..." no he doesn't. Do you honestly think this man wants his former wife to die? No he doesn't. He wants to free her from her suffering! You seem to have no ability to understand his point of view, which is she doesn't want to be a vegetable! WikiPedia must present both of these views, and your writing is extremely biased so that the reader cannot but think Michael is a fraud. He may be, but that cannot be the way the writing here demonstrates. Any bias on WikiPedia should come from the reader, not the writer.


 * First of all, how can you say, in the same paragraph, BOTH that she is a vegetable, AND that she is suffering? Do you not realize that is a contradiction?  Vegetables don't suffer.


 * In fact, she is NEITHER a vegetable NOR suffering.


 * Above are the names of eleven medical experts who have testified in court that she could benefit from the rehabilitative therapy that Michael refuses to permit her to receive:


 * You don't share Terri's faith (and you've never been married to someone of her faith) so you don't understand just how completely the annecdote about Michael preventing her from taking communion proves that he actually has NO regard for HER wishes. Anyone who knows anything at all about the Catholic Christian faith would understand that.  You missed it.  It is IMPOSSIBLE to imagine that any Roman Catholic believer on his death bed would not wish to receive communion.


 * Since Michael has PROVED his complete disdain for her wishes by refusing to let the priest put a tiny bit of consecrated host on her tongue (while she was dying, no less, because at that time he was denying her food and water), WHY on earth would you credit him with seeking to follow her desires in any other matter?


 * How can you say he doesn't want her dead? The fact is that Michael has been striving mightily to starve or dehydrate her to death for years -- a most painful way to die, BTW.  There is also substantial evidence that he physically abused her during their rocky marriage.  He also has a huge financial incentive for wanting her dead.


 * He has also been utterly neglectful of her basic health needs. Any woman can tell you how painful a UTI is.  But when Terri had one, he wouldn't even permit THAT to be treated.  And how about bad teeth?  She's lost five teeth so far due to dental neglect, under Michael's care.


 * However, despite that neglect, she is not, for the most part, in distress. You can tell that by her behavior: her smiles, her lack of agitation, etc.. -NCdave


 * For example, it is a NPOV fact that "Michael wants Terri to die by starvation & dehydration." But it would inject POV bias to say that "Michael wants Terry to die a horrible death by starvation & dehydration."  Note that the later version is POV even though death by starvation & deyhdration IS horrible by all reasonable standards, because we do not know (and have no reason to believe) that he wants her death to be horrible, all we know is that he wants her dead.  Do you understand the difference? -NCdave

And yes, her family is exploiting these "reflexes" for their own benefit. Since it is impossible to know Terri's stance on the issue it is impossible to state that anyone is doing anything for her benefit. Therefore, with Terri removed from the equation, the family is only operating on their own benefit, as is Michael and everyone else involved. And yes, reporting these "reflexes" as puckering up to kiss them and smiling when they talk is outrageously exploitative, trying to pull on the heartstrings of America. JnB987 14:41, 25 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * What utter, rediculous nonsense. Exploitation is the use of another person for SELFISH purposes.  Terri's family is doing NOTHING for their own benefit.  They have sacrificed extraordinarily, with NEVER a hope for gain for themselves.  They are doing it ALL from love for their daughter/sister.  They ask only to be allowed to care for her.  Have you never loved anyone like that?  Do you truly not understand that kind of love at all? -NCdave


 * What I see of the family (since you've shown at great length what you've seen of Michael) is a group of people who don't care about their daughter's wishes, but are selfish enough to condemn her to a life of misery just so they can keep her alive and pander to their own denial-laced needs to "cure" her, something which medically cannot be done at this time.


 * What utter rubbish. In the first place, if (as you pretend to believe) Terri is "a vegetable," then she cannot possibly be in "misery."  Vegetable's don't experience misery.


 * In the second place, Terri's family has been nothing if not loving to her. They have consistently sought only to be allowed to care for her.  Then don't even want the money that was awarded to pay for her rehabilitative therapy; they say they will find some other way to pay for her rehab, out of their own pockets, if Michael will just go away and leave them along to care for their daughter/sister.


 * Terri's family are not the ones who were physically abusing her when she was married - that was Michael. They are not the ones who have been denying her access to rehabilitative therapy for about 13 years - that is Michael.  They are not the ones who forbade treatment of her painful urinary tract infection - that was Michael.  They are not the ones whose outbursts of rage have terrified many other people, including at least one other ex-girlfriend - that was Michael.  They are not the ones who, on the morning of her injury, left her face-down in the hallway after she supposedly collapsed in the bathroom, who failed to call 9-1-1 promptly or attempt resuscitation (despite having had CPR training), and who didn't even attempt to lay her on her back and clear her airway - that was all Michael.NCdave 16:08, 4 Mar 2005 (UTC)


 * Michael, OTOH, has a big financial stake in her death. That's a conflict of interest which SHOULD rule out his being a decisionmaker w/r/t life & death decisions about her fate (and WOULD, in the hospitals where I live, even if she were brain dead, which, of course she isn't).


 * This is hearsay, but I believe I heard that Michael would refuse any money he'd receive. I'll look into that claim and will come back whether it's supported or unsupported.


 * Dream on. He is already controlling the money, and he won't even give an accounting for what he's already spent.  $300,000 of it was supposed to be for him, to compensate him for the loss of companionship of his wife (who was planning to divorce him anyhow - how's that for irony?).  The rest was supposed to be for Terri's care and rehabilitation, but he will inherit whatever is left of it when she dies, and he's spent at least several hundred thousand of it on lawyers, trying to get her killed.NCdave 16:08, 4 Mar 2005 (UTC)


 * Of COURSE it is possible to know Terri's stance on an issue on which the teachings of the Roman Catholic Church are crystal clear. There is no dispute over the fact that Terri is a devout Roman Catholic Christian.  But you don't know what the word "devout" MEANS, do you?  Her stance is obedience, because she is a devout Catholic, and devotion to Christ requires obedience.  Read that last sentence twice.  Christ said, "If you love me, you will obey what I command." -John 14:15.  So there literally can be NO DOUBT what she would say her views are on such a matter, if she could express them.  I can see that you would not understand that.  Yet you think you know Terri's mind better than the people who share her faith?\


 * So let me ask you a question, NCdave, being a Christian yourself, I assume. If you had the choice of living indeterminedly in the most excruciating pain imaginable, against your wishes (which you happened to discuss with your primary caretaker beforehand), you wouldn't feel at all inclined to try and make it stop? If the Roman Catholic God cannot forgive a soul in such pain for choosing euthanasia, than that Roman Catholic God is not the God for the terminally ill.


 * Terri is not in pain. If she were in pain, then analgesics would be the appropriate treatment, but she is not.  Look at the photos & videos!  She is generally comfortable.  But she WILL be in great pain, if Michael Schiavo has his way: death by starvation+dehydration is said to be excruciating.NCdave 16:08, 4 Mar 2005 (UTC)


 * Michael Schiavo's credibility is zilch, too. He's a bigamist with a common law second wife, who has made a mockery of his wedding vows.  What sane person would trust the word of such a man, particularly when he has a $million incentive to lie??  Moreover, his supposed recollection of Terri's wish to die under circumstances like these came to him suspiciously late (not until after the big disability award gave him reason to want her dead), and NOBODY else EVER heard her say such a thing.  Her entire family is sure he just plain made it up.  But you think you know Terri's mind better than the people who know her best?


 * Michael is not a bigamist. If he was, he'd be in jail, wouldn't he? Bigamy is illegal in America. If you have evidence of him being a bigamist, you should turn him in! He'd be a wanted man! What Michael did was something the family can't and should: move on. Terri is never going to regain any form of recognizable life. She is in a Persistant Vegetative State. Now, I am one to recognize "there's a first for everything" and maybe Terri can emerge as a fully-functional human being again. But I am also one to recognize the sheer stupidity of that belief and the rationalization that Michael has made. Terri is, for all intents and purposes, gone. When you say he wants her to die so he can collect the insurance money and live happily with his second wife, you do not understand his reasoning. Do you believe that every widow and widower in the history of earth should live a single, celibate life? Michael believes (as he has every right and reason to) that his wife has essentially passed on, and he has tried to move on. But you probably don't see it that way. It comes through in your cynical writing about him, NCdave. You think he's lying through his ass. Well, that might make you ineligible to be editing this article.


 * Bigamy is being married to more than one person at a time. Michael has been living as husband to another woman for a decade, and has fathered two children by her.  Traditionally, that living arrangement would be considered a common-law marriage.  However, since 1968 Florida has abolished by statute the old common-law marriage rules, so, technically, he is not in violation of the bigamy statutes.  However, he is certainly in violation of the law against "open adultery," which is also punishable by imprisonment:


 * You are under a misconception w/r/t Michael's marriage. He needn't remain married to Terri.  He is not a widower, but he could simply divorce her.  Either three years of mental incapacity on the part of one spouse, or a judgment by the court that "the marriage is irretrievably broken," is grounds for divorce in Florida.  Their marriage would qualify on both grounds.  So Michael needn't have been celibate to avoid life as an adulterer, and he need not have fathered those two children as bastards.  Terri's family would like him to simply divorce her, and go away.  But he won't do it, because he wants her money.


 * As for Terri's condition, as a matter of medical fact, contrary to what Judge Greer says, she is not "vegetative." Whether or not Terri can be helped by therapy is a matter of longstanding dispute, with qualified medical experts having testified on both sides of the issue.  The only way to know for sure is to try: let her have rehabilitative therapy for six months or a year, and see whether she has improved.  But Michael Schiavo refuses to permit that.NCdave 16:08, 4 Mar 2005 (UTC)


 * How can you not understand the difference between truth and lies, between appeals to conscience and manipulative pulling on heartstrings? The fact is that those videotapes and photographs of Terri convey the Truth about her condition.  Do you also think that photos of the NAZI's victims are likewise "outrageously exploitive" because they tug at your heartstrings? NCdave 06:34, 26 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * This definitely makes you ineligible to be editing this article. You just compared Michael to the Nazi's. You just compared Michael to the Nazi's.


 * I'm speechless. Are you that blind in your hatred of everything Michael stands for that you would compare this one man to the merciless machine that slaughtered millions upon millions? Christ! If you think I'm outrageous for suggesting that Terri is dead, you may need to check your bucket. There might be some holes in it.


 * (Note: this is JnB987 on a secondary computer)


 * Yeah, sure, Terri is dead, and the moon is made of cheese. I didn't compare Michael to the NAZIs (after all, he's only trying to kill one woman).  I compared YOUR complaint (about the heartwarming videos and photos which show Terri smiling and kissing) to the complaints of those who don't want to be accept the reality of the NAZI's crimes, and so complain about photos of pitiful, starving  concentration camp inmates because they, too, tug at heartstrings. NCdave 22:39, 26 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * Forgive me, but I don't see the connection between "heartwarming" videos of Terri Schiavo having reflexatory reactions to her surroundings and the brutality of the holocaust. Are you trying to say that I can't accept the reality of Michael's crimes? I think the smart thing to do would be to apologize for an outrageously over-the-top and out-of-bounds statement, before you continue to offend my Jewish eyes. Trust me, I'll forgive you (it's the Christian thing to do, after all.) 24.91.21.253 00:01, 27 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * You REALLY don't see the connection between the use of sympathy-invoking photos of helpless Terri, who is about to be killed by starvation, and the sympathy-invoking photos of emancipated concentration camp inmates, who the NAZIs nearly killed by starvation? SERIOUSLY?  JnB987 hated the families use of sympathy-invoking photos in the former case, calling them "outrageously exploitative, trying to pull on the heartstrings of America."  But to object in the former case and not in the latter is hypocrisy, of course, rooted in heavy POV bias.  Isn't that obvious?


 * The fact is that a boatload of medical experts have testified that Terri could be helped with therapy -- which, of course, would not be possible if her smiles and puckers were truly just reflexes. But you think you know better than all those doctors?


 * 24.91.21.253 couln't see the connection, so his solution was wholesale vandalism: he DELETED more than 3/4 of the references (even the references to the four-part investigative article in that right-wing rag, The Village Voice), and restored numerous already corrected errors (including two errors that I had previously made, and corrected myself, one on each side of the issue). Oy.  I'll restore it. NCdave 06:00, 27 Feb 2005 (UTC)

This article is ridiculously biased toward the right-to-life view. Inflammatory language such as "die of starvation" and a general assignation of agency to her husband (instead of to the court) is not in the spirit of NPOV. If you compare this to an article on an unbiased newswire (q.v. ) you will see that the selective use of words like "claim" and "refuse" on this page do not reflect an objective reportage of the events. The anecdote about Michael Schiavo intervening during the performance of Communion upon the woman is not relevant information, is inflammatory, and should be removed. In fact I'm going to remove it now. Tcassedy 03:33, 26 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * Your argument is with the facts, not with me, Tcassedy. The FACT is that when Michael Schiavo had Terri's feeding tube removed last time, HE SIMULTANEOUSLY PROHIBITED HER FAMILY FROM FEEDING HER BY MOUTH.  His purpose was simply to starve and deyhdrate her to death (a particularly nasty death, BTW).  The statement that he seeks her death by starvation is indisputable.  For someone to charge that such a simple, clear statement of an indisputable fact, utterly unembellished by adjectives, is "inflammatory," seems proof to me that you have no clue what the difference is between POV-bias and NPOV. NCdave

Recent Discussions
I have placed a POV warning on the page. Just reading up on some of the newsreports on Google news shows me that neutrality on this subject is obtainable and that it should be here too. Not being American I don't know very much about this and really don't have any opinion on the subject, but the article as it stands is clearly POV even at a quick glance. Maybe some fresh eyes is needed on this. Preisler 07:21, 26 Feb 2005 (UTC)

I am working on a revamp of this article and attempt to stake out a more neutral tone overall. I am certain is is possible to acknowledge the very passionate beliefs of both sides in this matter without showing undue bias. I would ask that moderate members of both communities leave comments on my talk page for reference. I expect the article to be complete within 24 hours. --Lazarias 17:12, 2 Mar 2005 (UTC)


 * You're welcome to try to fix the article up- I agree that it's not perfect, especially in its coverage of Michael Schiavo, the "falling out" between Michael and the Schindlers, and recent court developments. I also think this article overstates the importance and the possibility that Terri's cardiac arrest was caused by trauma. While trauma/battery is a possibility, we have to be clear that this is just speculation. But as Be bold states, try not to be reckless in your changes. I'm somewhat satisfied with the neutrality of the current article and I believe NCdave is too. Please try not to upset the balance. Rhobite 18:43, Mar 2, 2005 (UTC)


 * I am far from satisifed with the neutrality of the current article. It is VERY SEVERELY biased in favor of Michael Schiavo's POV.  I have restored the NPOV tag.NCdave 16:08, 4 Mar 2005 (UTC)

I'm looking at it as a work in progress as I still think the tone on both sides is rather critical. However, if there are major objection to whayt I've done they can always revert and I won't take it personally. --Lazarias 19:12, 2 Mar 2005 (UTC)


 * I think it's a good change overall, although you did omit a few inline references. When the site is faster and I have more time I'll probably go over it. There are a couple grammar and style issues (long sentences etc), you may want to give it a quick proofread. Rhobite 19:24, Mar 2, 2005 (UTC)


 * The only way to make this article NPOV is include the information that the Micheal Schiavo partisans here keep deleting: The 14 Wesley Smith articles, the information about her non-vegetative conditition and prospects for improvement, the evidence that Michael was a violent and abusive husband even before her injury, the testimony about Michael's abuse of Terri after her injury, the fact that, during the weeks prior to her injury, Terri had told others of her intent to divorce Michael, the fact that Michael seeks to forbid even spoon-feeding her, etc..NCdave 16:08, 4 Mar 2005 (UTC)


 * I fully understand your point but the manner in which most of the information supporting Terri's family is presented as statements of fact, which unfortunately is not the case. Statements that have not been proven in court cannot be established as fact and therefore putting them in the article would establish a large NPOV violation. I think that the current article underscores the suspicion of the motivations and history of Michael Schiavo without resorting to declarations of fact that have not been proven, and are simply allegations. *However, I do have a suggestion of how to add more of the information you requested without veering into a bias. NCdave, if you would be so kind as to write a paragraph or two on the allegations against Micheal Schivao doing your best not to inflame passions and simply inform on the allegations, I think that would be an excellent addition as a sub-heading. It's quite obvious that you are very passionate about this case, but your choice of words like 'pro-death' are unduly inflamatory and could be written in a much more neutral tone. Also, before you accuse me of being one of Michael's partisans, I would have you know that I disagree greatly with his choices in the administration of his wife's health, but note with a certain amount of sourness, that it is his right to make medical decisions for his wife. That is one of the principal obligations of marriage.--Lazarias 16:41, 4 Mar 2005 (UTC)

OK
She kinda brought this on herself with the bulimia and all. And if she was bulimic, then she wouldn't want the feeding tube anyway, would she?
 * Heh, although that makes sense in a weird way, I'm certain that putting that in the article would cause heads to explode. So now that it's over, can people start relaxing now instead of trying to propagate ideals? Remember, this is not a discussion about what's right or wrong or who is POV. Just get the facts down as they have been stated by authorities. If some doctors have stated that she may benefit from therapy: how much do they believe she might benefit, how did they reach that conclusion (from what material)? What newspaper has speculated on "Michael Schiavo's possible monetary motives"? What newspaper has clamped down on the parents? Quote and reference, quote and reference. Do not even hint at any speculation unless some other entity of importance said it, and you can produce a reference. Otherwise it is POV by definition. fbjon ^^ 4649 20:59, 31 Mar 2005 (UTC)