Talk:Terropterus/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Simongraham (talk · contribs) 19:12, 31 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

 * "more sparse " – consider rewording as some people prefer "sparser".
 * changed "arranged in a more sparse manner" to "arranged more sparsely". Ichthyovenator (talk) 00:32, 1 August 2021 (UTC)


 * In the lead, it states that the species is the only mixopterid known from Gondwana while the body states that it is "the first known mixopterid from the southern continent of Gondwana". Please clarify.
 * It basically means the same thing - it's the first one to be discovered from Gondwana, so is also the only one known so far. I've changed things around so that it now just goes with "only one known" in both places. Ichthyovenator (talk) 00:32, 1 August 2021 (UTC)


 * Link carapace, family, genus and phylogenetic.
 * Done. Ichthyovenator (talk) 00:32, 1 August 2021 (UTC)
 * Thank you for making these amendments. The article is now ready to review. simongraham (talk) 13:15, 1 August 2021 (UTC)

Assessment
 Comprehension: The comprehension is good.

Verifiability: The article is verifiable.

Comprehensiveness: The article is comprehensive.

Neutrality: The article is neutral.

Stability: The article is stable. Illustration: The article is well illustrated.

Overall: Pass/fail. 

