Talk:Teuta/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Claritas § 19:47, 30 June 2010 (UTC)
 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * The only issues here is the statement that "She was not really called Queen by Appian", which is both too casual and unclear, and some comma/punctuation issues which can be sorted out by a quick copy/edit. Put citations after punctuation, not before.
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * No issues here, I think it is very well sourced.
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * I think it's generally good, but I think some more biographical detail might be required - are approximate dates of birth/death recorded ? What happened to Illyria after her rule was "dismembered" ? It didn't become a Roman Province until 165 B.C.E. Who succeeded her ?
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * No issues here.
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * This is picky, but I think you might want a more explanatory caption for the map of the Illryian wars - "A map showing...." maybe ?
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * I'm going to put this on hold pending improvements to the article. Good work so far ! Claritas § 19:47, 30 June 2010 (UTC)
 * I'm going to put this on hold pending improvements to the article. Good work so far ! Claritas § 19:47, 30 June 2010 (UTC)


 * 1st wave of tweaking in accordance with the upper criteria - done!  Er-vet-en  ( say ) 06:58, 1 July 2010 (UTC)
 * I've done some style editing myself, and, considering the obscurity of the topic and what little information is available, I think this meets WP:GAC. Claritas § 19:26, 8 July 2010 (UTC)