Talk:Tewolde Berhan Gebre Egziabher

Biased/peacock words
This article reads like a public relations puff piece, using colorful but subjective characterizations throughout.


 * "which is effectively that country's Ministry of the Environment." It is what it is.  This further characterization adds nothing to understanding the function of the organization.
 * "put much of his energy" A clearly subjective description.
 * "a strong group of well-prepared African negotiators who began to take the lead" Peacock words.
 * "united, strong, progressive positions" Reflects a judgment on the nature of the positions taken without stating what the positions are.
 * "protects biosafety and biodiversity" Evaluates the expected results rather than explaining the actions taken. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.188.101.149 (talk) 16:55, 3 October 2013 (UTC)