Talk:Texas Recreational Road 7/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 23:39, 23 June 2012 (UTC)

Reviewer

 * No dablinks;
 * Ext. links perfect;
 * Lead
 * Good
 * Route descrpition
 * Good, but i recommend some improvements on the prose:
 * Avoid using -way words at the start of each paragraph
 * Each sentence has "ranch". I think it can get awful, let's take a look:
 * "RE 7 begins at an intersection with SH 72, located several miles east of the unincorporated community of Tilden, as a two-lane, paved road." This sentence is perfect.
 * "The highway proceeds northward for a very short distance, before turning northeastward. The road proceeds northeast, passing through rural ranch land." → "The highway proceeds northward for a very short distance, before turning northeastward, passing through a rural land."
 * "The highway continues past a small reservoir, and an oil drilling station, before re-entering rural ranch land. The road continues northeast to its northern terminus, the designated end of state maintenance. A road continues northeasterly to the reservoir, and ends at a boat-launch ramp." → "The road continues past a small reservoir and an oil drilling station before re-entering rural land and following northeast to its northern terminus, the designated end of state maintenance. A road continues northeasterly to the reservoir, and ends at a boat-launch ramp."
 * Changed both sentances. - Awardgive, the editor with the msitaken name. 20:46, 24 June 2012 (UTC)

I'll put it on hold until the prose recommendations are addressed. Regards. — Hahc 21  15:42, 24 June 2012 (UTC)
 * History
 * Too short for my taste, but nothing can be done. Soo, it's good.
 * Major juctions
 * Good.
 * References
 * Good.
 * Fixed concerns. - Awardgive, the editor with the msitaken name. 20:46, 24 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Ok. It passed. Regards! — Hahc 21  21:51, 24 June 2012 (UTC)