Talk:Texas pride

Peer Review: The biggest problem I observed was that it seemed that you were trying to tell a creative story rather than neutrally inform the reader about the topic. I think it would be beneficial to write in a more third person perspective in order to eliminate bias and the kind of narrative that you have created. Another thing I noticed was that the article went from past tense to present in a confusing way within and between the subtopics, which added to the off feeling of the narrative. Crhees (talk) 07:07, 18 November 2018 (UTC)Crhees