Talk:Thaipusam/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 03:45, 27 April 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Vestrian24Bio (talk · contribs) 12:52, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

@ Vestrian24Bio Thanks for taking it up. Will address the comments shortly.Magentic Manifestations (talk) 13:06, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

Progress
Hi! I'll be reviewing this article, current progress is shown in the below section; with additional comments afterwards it. Vestrian24Bio ( TALK  ) 12:52, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

Comments
1a: I found the following sentences in need to be given a rewriting.
 * The 3rd paragraph of the lead should be amended the following way:
 * Tamils should direectly link to Tamils instead.✅
 * South East Asia should be Southeast Asia.✅
 * Fiji, Mauritius, South Africa and Canada, Caribbean countries including Trinidad and Tobago, Guyana and Suriname should be Fiji, Mauritius, South Africa, Canada and Caribbean countries including Trinidad and Tobago, Guyana and Suriname.✅
 * Same changes should be made on the first paragraph of Outside India section as well.✅

1b: The sidebar should come after the infobox per MOS:ORDER.✅

2a: All good.

2b:
 * First paragraphs of Practices section and Outside India section needs more citations. ✅

2c: All good.

3, 4, 5, 6: All good. Vestrian24Bio ( TALK  ) 12:52, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

@Vestrian24Bio, comments have been addressed. Thanks! Magentic Manifestations (talk) 14:01, 2 July 2024 (UTC)


 * All good; I'll finish the review now. Vestrian24Bio ( TALK  ) 14:10, 2 July 2024 (UTC)