Talk:Thandi Brewer

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): AuBeYeux. Peer reviewers: Tessadfr.

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Peer Review
Hi AuBeYeux! I just checked out your article "Thandi Brewer" and I have some comments to offer.

I like the different subcategories you offer in your Filmography and how you differentiated the different type of works Thandi Brewer has done within the film industry. It is well organized and easy to navigate. The "uncredited contributions to script" subcategory however is a bit less specific than the others such as a lack of date of release or director. Are they movies that did not end up being made? I found some results on google for two of them but not for the others, so it could be that. I think it would improve that subcategory to add some dates and directors like you did for the others.

The writing is very good for a Wikipedia article! I think that you did a really good job at keeping it formal and objective enough for a Wikipedia article. Your choice of information is good and they are always well referenced. I think it would help your article however to find a bit more sources and add more to it. Your "Biography" category is a bit short. I think adding other categories as well regarding Thandi Brewer's work would help!

There are some writing mistakes but they are mostly in the two first sentences of your "Biography" section. Otherwise the writing is good!

All in all, I liked reading about this screenwriter and I think your article is on a very good start! But I think it would be good if you added some more information about that screenwriter.

Tessadfr (talk) 14:54, 16 March 2016 (UTC)

Thank for your review. I had a bit more of information in my biography. I made some research on google but I did not found good sources. I have found many sources with different information on the date of the movie title I write in the uncredited section of my article. But there is nothing I can be sure of. — Preceding unsigned comment added by AuBeYeux (talk • contribs) 02:44, 30 March 2016 (UTC)

No citations in article
This article has virtually no citations of any kind in it. I'm not sure how to go about putting up the correct header requesting that an editor fixes the situation. Can anyone help? Cadar (talk) 12:57, 22 May 2018 (UTC)