Talk:That's Not My... (book series)/GA1

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 17:46, 15 August 2022 (UTC)

There isn't much to say, just some very minor copy issues and a suggestion to archive references. 7-day hold for. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 17:46, 15 August 2022 (UTC)


 * Hi @Sammi Brie, thanks so much for reviewing! I’ll be making these changes on my mobile so apologies if I’m a bit slower/sloppier than intended. I’ll ping you when I’m done.  Unexpected lydian♯4 talk‽  15:56, 17 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Since you're on mobile, I ran IABot for you. I see you've made all the copy changes, @Unexpectedlydian; is that all that was needed? Sammi Brie  (she/her • t • c) 17:48, 17 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank you that’s super helpful :) Yes, that was everything!  Unexpected lydian♯4 talk‽  19:33, 17 August 2022 (UTC)

Lead

 * Every book focusses on a different subject, which include animals, vehicles and people — "subject" and "include" don't agree in plurality. Maybe "which have included"?

Format

 * Comma after (2011)
 * brightly-coloured Adverb: don't hyphenate
 * child and adult, and drop the comma. more: User:Sammi Brie/Commas in sentences
 * child and adult, and drop the comma. more: User:Sammi Brie/Commas in sentences
 * child and adult, and drop the comma. more: User:Sammi Brie/Commas in sentences

Background

 * Usborne executives where Add comma after "executives"
 * He later changed his mind and the first book You need a comma after "mind" here
 * He later changed his mind and the first book You need a comma after "mind" here

Reception

 * Add comma after "United Kingdom" first sentence
 * Add hyphen before "themed" to read That's Not My Meerkat...-themed bench
 * Add hyphen before "themed" to read That's Not My Meerkat...-themed bench

Other

 * Archive references with IABot.
 * No copyvio issues found by Earwig.
 * The lone image is a fair use book cover with alt text.