Talk:That International Rag/GA1

GA Review
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This is a nice, short article that comes very close to meeting the GA criteria. I noticed three things during the GA review:


 * 1) The quotation in the "Reception" section should be introduced with some commentary rather than just pasted into the article.
 * 2) Is only one review of the song available?
 * 3) Should the reader know who the "Victor Military Band" is? The "Reception" section is fairly sparse, so any information about what became of the song would help.

I will place this nomination on hold to allow for these concerns to be addressed and/or discussed. Any questions and/or comments can be left here, as I have placed this page on my watchlist. Best wishes, GaryColemanFan (talk) 03:25, 25 October 2008 (UTC)
 * Eight days have passed with no response and no progress. Unfortunately, I am going to have to fail the nomination. I urge the editor(s) involved to use these suggestions for future improvements to the article. I hope to see this article back at GA once this has been done, as it has definite GA potential and it a very interesting article. GaryColemanFan (talk) 06:19, 2 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Sigh, fair enough. Been getting stretched thin.  Thank you very much for the feedback.  I'll make good use of it when I've got a bit more time.  Durova Charge! 06:55, 2 November 2008 (UTC)