Talk:That Should Be Me/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: CallMe Nathan   &bull;  Talk2Me   00:38, 4 May 2011 (UTC)


 * I like the song, so I'm reviewing it :)-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   00:39, 4 May 2011 (UTC)

Lead

 * Most music critics positively received the song, and it debuted -> there has to be some kind of connector to these totally opposite things.
 * Both are reception.


 * after the release of My World 2.0. -> following the release
 * Candy o32  14:43, 1 June 2011 (UTC)

Background

 * The mix was assisted by Christian Plata and Erik Madrid. Atweh and Luke Boyd perform background vocals on the song. -> try and tie this into one flowing sentence


 * Described as a "sobbing" ballad -> by who?
 * Candy o32  14:44, 1 June 2011 (UTC)

Reception

 * RChris Richards -> typo?


 * "That Should Be Me" also appeared on the UK Singles Chart at number 179 -> source? Also for Billboard source

Music video

 * who is playing the keyboard. Bieber then sings his lines, playing guitar -> inconsistent
 * How so? [Bieber] comes before who. What other wording would you suggest?


 * The woman who directed the band into the studio now directs them and Bieber into another room with lights, to film the video. -> I'm pretty sure its Bieber's mother
 * 1:09-1:15 is definitely not this woman. Candy  o32  13:39, 3 June 2011 (UTC)

Source queries

 * 3 -> publisher?
 * Publisher is listed. Not linked because it is the same link for the work.


 * 6 -> publisher?
 * Washington Post published by the Washington Post Company, and I've been told in FL procedures that in such cases only the work should be noted.


 * 9 -> over-link


 * What makes 10 and 12 reliable?
 * No thread about their reliability, but I have used HitFix numerous times in my own GA's, and TVbytheNumbers/Zap2it is heavily used in television articles. Candy  o32  13:44, 3 June 2011 (UTC)


 * 14 again over-link
 * Can't unlink myself as it is the singlechart template. Candy  o32  13:46, 3 June 2011 (UTC)


 * Nice job, sorry again for the 3-week delay, had some extra issues on Wiki that prevented some immediate editing. You have 1 days to make these fixes....Lol, take you time ;)-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   18:42, 30 May 2011 (UTC)


 * Alrighty, this one is a pass. Good work.-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   21:57, 6 June 2011 (UTC)