Talk:The Actor and the Rube/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 12:04, 1 February 2015 (UTC)

Time for another review.

Lead section
 * "The plot of the film has a cranky farmer, disliked by his entire town, head to New York." Suggest rewriting to: "The plot of the film is about a cranky farmer, who, disliked by his entire town, decides to head to New York"
 * "and was also released in Britain under the alternate title" I would suggest changing Britain to United Kingdom.
 * "with the New York Clipper finding it a welcome relief from the "pie-smashing" antics of other comedies." I suggest linking "pie-smashing" under low comedy.

Plot
 * I noticed you linked New York in this section but not in the lead.

Reception and legacy
 * I suggest changing the title of this section to "Release and reception"
 * Any reason why the film is lost?

References
 * Link the publishers of these sources if possible.

Placing it on hold for now. I will promote once the issues above are addressed. good888 (talk) 15:09, 1 February 2015 (UTC)
 * - Fixes done. To answer your questions "pie-smashing" to low comedy results in a surprise link and the reference is likely to actual pie-smashing. The film is presumed lost, but there is no single reason for these being lost and I cannot cite anything direct for this. Thanks for reviewing. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 17:04, 2 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Nice job once again. Promoting to GA class. good888 (talk) 09:14, 4 February 2015 (UTC)