Talk:The Age of Adz/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: W IKIPEDIAN PENGUIN  (♫♫)  03:45, 23 July 2011 (UTC)

Review of Revision 17:09, 22 July 2011 (UTC). Normally I would go through a section by section check, "scanning" for issues. But I think a detailed analysis against the criteria is better for this article as it is not really the minor problems holding the article back in this case. Please see the review below. For your convenience, I used this template as it shows the full good article criteria.
 * Comments about review


 * Final comments about the review

Although I am not changing the overall status of this nominee (pass/fail), this page is still open for the time being for comments about the criteria and my review. Thanks. W IKIPEDIAN PENGUIN (♫♫)  18:12, 24 July 2011 (UTC)


 * Thank you for the review, it appears very thorough and helpful.  Jujutacular  talk 19:37, 24 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks for taking the time to fix some of the issues. I look forward to this article being renominated, though who knows who'll review it. W IKIPEDIAN PENGUIN  (♫♫)  21:33, 24 July 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your review. However, I was hoping that I could respond to many of the points you raise before a final decision was passed (i.e., because I'm working on the article at the moment). I'm disappointed about that, since that's what I have done with other GANs. MasterOfHisOwnDomain (talk) 22:30, 24 July 2011 (UTC)
 * I understand. But I also want you to take your time into expanding the article. As I said in the overall review, the small fixes can be done in a matter of seven days. I don't want you to rush with the article for a second nomination. Keep up the work! Make the next one successful. :) Oh and the charts belong in a section of their own. Thanks for your comments. W IKIPEDIAN PENGUIN  (♫♫)  13:25, 25 July 2011 (UTC)