Talk:The Amazing Digital Circus/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 01:46, 13 May 2024 (UTC)


 * @Skyshifter The review is done, hope these can be addressed! Good luck to you and your fellow editors. :) Arconning (talk) 14:59, 17 May 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 12:57, 14 May 2024 (UTC)


 * I will be reviewing this article, comments will probably be finished in the next 72 hours! Good luck to the editors! Can't believe this article is up for GAN so I decided to take it up, lol. Arconning (talk · contribs)

Lead

 * to the whims of a rogue artificial intelligence., change whims to a more formal word.
 * I don't see how "whims" is too informal. What word would you suggest instead?--Eldomtom2 (talk) 15:29, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Did "instructions", like the Synopsis section. Skyshifter   talk  18:27, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Gooseworx pitched the series to Glitch inspired, add comma after Glitch.
 * Done Skyshifter   talk  17:59, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
 * The pilot became viral and one..., rewrite to The pilot went viral and became one....
 * Done Skyshifter   talk  17:59, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
 * most viewed, add hyphen.
 * Done Skyshifter   talk  17:59, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
 * and was nominated for an Annie Award., add it before was.
 * Done Skyshifter   talk  17:59, 17 May 2024 (UTC)

Synopsis

 * No issues. Pass.

Voice cast

 * Would like to know if there's any source that supports the claims.. :)
 * Added sources related to the characters. These sources don't confirm the voice actors; however, the actors are credited at the end of each episode. I think that, following the logic of MOS:PLOTSOURCE, it can be presumed that the episode's credits reference that information. If needed though, I can add the episodes as additional, primary references. PLOTSOURCE should also apply to some "Guests" to whom I couldn't find secondary sources. Skyshifter   talk  18:27, 17 May 2024 (UTC)

Episodes

 * but deserts, add she after but.
 * Done Skyshifter   talk  17:59, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
 * "void",, put comma inside of quotes in this situation.
 * I don't think this is the case per MOS:QUOTECOMMA and MOS:LQ, unless I understood it wrong. Skyshifter   talk  17:59, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
 * desire for one, but could, remove comma.
 * Done Skyshifter   talk  17:59, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
 * and the other NPCs,, with his feelings of worthlessness,, remove commas.
 * Done Skyshifter   talk  17:59, 17 May 2024 (UTC)

Background and production

 * while Glitch Productions's founders Kevin and Luke Lerdwichagul, add commas after founders and Lerdwichagul.
 * Done Skyshifter   talk  17:59, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
 * which she accepted., which she then accepted.
 * Done Skyshifter   talk  17:59, 17 May 2024 (UTC)

Release

 * The episode, "Candy Carrier Chaos!", was released on May 3, 2024. could be probably sourced with a secondary source rather than the primary one.
 * Added ComicBook.com alongside it. Skyshifter   talk  17:59, 17 May 2024 (UTC)

Reception

 * By late November,, add year.
 * Done Skyshifter   talk  17:59, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
 * it surpassed 150 million views, it had surpassed...
 * Done Skyshifter   talk  17:59, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
 * and, by February, remove comma.
 * Done Skyshifter   talk  17:59, 17 May 2024 (UTC)

Images

 * Image has proper licenses and is relevant to the topic.

Refs

 * Refs are properly formatted with primary sources in a different section.
 * The amount of primary sources is half of the secondary sources, hopefully more secondary sources can be provided for the article.
 * I think the primary sources work well as a support for the secondary ones. I don't think more secondary sources can be added; there's not many high-quality sources talking about the series. Skyshifter   talk  17:59, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
 * I added one additional source for the voice cast, and another one published just yesterday! Skyshifter   talk  18:27, 17 May 2024 (UTC)

Spotchecks

 * Manual and automated checking shows up nothing. Pass.

Misc.

 * No ongoing edit war, neutral, focused on the topic, and broad in its coverage.

I believe everything has been addressed! Skyshifter  talk  18:27, 17 May 2024 (UTC)