Talk:The Angry Joe Show

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Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 04:08, 18 January 2022 (UTC)

Sanquinecowboy Peer Review
Your lead is quite good, giving a basic description of the topic and explaining what it is. That first sentence is perhaps the most important on a Wikipedia page. My only recommendation would be to merge those first two short sentences into one that would flow better as a complete thought. If you're having trouble formatting your section headings, when editing the page don't forget to switch the paragraph setting at the top to heading to create the different sections. Other than those minor changes, do not forget to cite your sources in the article itself.

Sanguinecowboy peer review
I think that your lead is good, considering that it doesn't go into too much detail, but rather just giving the basics. The only concern I have really is the history section, because since I don't know about this show really at all, I am a little lost on what is going on. Maybe lead a little bit into the Nintendo scandal and explain more about what was going on. Also does he have a website of his own or is it on youtube? Other than that, I think you have a great start on this article! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Taylnew (talk • contribs) 16:32, 20 April 2018 (UTC)