Talk:The Aran Islands (book)

Hi

This looks very promising - well done! The sources you're using are great, and the brief introduction you've crafted is very useful indeed. I'm not sure that plot, language and relevance are the best headings to use moving forward. This is a travel narrative, so it won't have a plot like a fictional book. Perhaps summary would be better. I am not sure that'll you'll be able to find sufficient material on Synge's use of language in The Aran Islands, but perhaps you can prove me wrong. And relevance seems a little vague to me: relevance to what? In terms of criticism, perhaps rename this section reception to allow for greater neutrality. Overall - a solid foundation laid here. EmerOToole (talk) 17:38, 18 October 2018 (UTC)

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Hey ! It's a good start to a promising article ! It's a very nice style of writing ! A few things to think about i think would be:

- Since this is a travel book? journal, maybe detailing the journey a little more in the summary (The names of the islands), The period which it depicts etc. a little more info to set the mood or situate the journal.

- maybe separating the article summary section or "Plot" per book instead of just one general and very brief paragraph on the whole collection - also since this is a journal, maybe "Plot" is not that appropriate ? <- IDK

Other than that, Everything seems pretty good to me ! Good Luck ! Shazia.RR (talk) 19:44, 28 October 2018 (UTC)shazia.rrShazia.RR (talk) 19:44, 28 October 2018 (UTC)

Hi

Looking great. Please change the tense of the summary to the present tense and then move this to wikipedia. Tag me when you've done this and I'll let you if I think anything else needs to be changed or added before you get a final grade for this assignment. Nearly there! Excellent work. EmerOToole (talk) 19:26, 8 November 2018 (UTC)

Hi - you should add a table of contents here, which will come after your brief introductory section. See any wiki page for a model.
 * Hi, I added a Toc Kkravetz (talk) 03:36, 28 November 2018 (UTC)