Talk:The Automata

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Hi. I'm your student editor. (Love the username.) First and most obviously to me are the sources you use. I deleted the tag about using a single source since that's changed since whoever put all the tags added it, but as of right now you only seem to have 4 sources out of the required 5 for our class. I agree with the tag about overly detailed plot. Ideally, this would be made more concise. I also went ahead and corrected a place where you misspelled "Adelgunda" to make it match the others. Lastly, I think I would focus most of my effort into expanding the first paragraph of the "Historical Significance" section, especially by giving a quick note on how each "part of the frame narrative" explores… etc. Perhaps just a sentence for each would be good enough. This would serve the dual purpose of making the paragraph clearer to the reader and justifying why you meet the "notability guideline for books". Good luck! Penrose Delta (talk) 05:29, 9 June 2017 (UTC)

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Dodecahedan. Peer reviewers: Penrose Delta.

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