Talk:The Balkan Girls/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 02:07, 11 June 2018 (UTC)

Hello, I will be reviewing your GA nomination over the next couple of days. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 02:07, 11 June 2018 (UTC)

Infobox

 * Cat → Cay Music
 * "Music" or "Records" should not be included in the infobox per Wikipedia's guidelines. Cartoon network freak (talk) 08:43, 17 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Ok. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:55, 17 June 2018 (UTC)

Lead

 * "The Balkan Girls" is a song recorded by Romanian singer Elena Gheorghe" → remove "recorded"


 * "Written by Laurențiu Duță" → It was Written by Laurențiu Duță


 * "Music critics generally gave the song favorable review, praising its beat and catchiness" → Music critics generally gave the song mixed reviews, praising its beat while criticizing for its cheesiness.


 * "music video released in March 2009." → add something summarizing what the video is about.
 * ✅ Cartoon network freak (talk) 08:48, 17 June 2018 (UTC)

Background and release

 * "and third record" → and her third record


 * The sample should be here.
 * ✅ Cartoon network freak (talk) 08:49, 17 June 2018 (UTC)

Reception and accolades

 * "In his book, Handbuch der Eurolinguistik (Handbook of Eurolinguistics), Uwe Hinrichs cited the " → Uwe Hinrichs, in his book, Handbuch der Eurolinguistik (Handbook of Eurolinguistics), cited the... (otherwise seems like its the book belonging to the previous author.)


 * "the Azerbaijani entrants in the Eurovision Song Contest 2009" → explain relevancy?
 * ✅ Yeah, it's not relevant actually, you're right. Removed. Cartoon network freak (talk) 08:51, 17 June 2018 (UTC)

Music video and promotion

 * followed by its YouTube release the following day →  followed by its YouTube release the next day (avoid repetition of vocabulary)


 * Bucharest's Silver Church club → Bucharest's Silver Church Club


 * female dancers and dances there with fellow dancers→ female dancers and dances there with fellow dancers → same as the first one, "dance, dancers, dances..."
 * ✅ Reworded. Cartoon network freak (talk) 08:53, 17 June 2018 (UTC)

National selection

 * Fine.

In Moscow

 * Fine.

Points awarded to Romania

 * Fine.

Track listing

 * Fine.

Charts

 * Fine.

Release history

 * Cat → Cat Music

Overall

 * Sorry it took so long, thank you for being so patient. The article is quite outstanding, minor issues and it is passed. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 23:39, 16 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Hi there and thank you very much for taking time to review my article. I have responded to your comments above. Best regards; Cartoon network freak (talk) 08:57, 17 June 2018 (UTC)