Talk:The Bear Necessities

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Hi there- I have several questions about this article. I want to work on it to get the issues resolved/the information confirmed. On notability, I believe the group's page is notable because of the connection to Masi Oka. Masi Oka has spoken about his connection to the group in interviews and in publication. I believe before this article was created, the group was referenced on Masi Oka's wikipedia page and there was an incorrect link to the song The Bear Necessities, not the group. This page seems to be important in order to provide the background for this famous actor. I have reworked some of the language as well. I am unsure from here how to make it more neutral/seem less like an advertisement. Do you have suggestions?

Carrie Carrielwilson (talk) 02:24, 9 December 2011 (UTC)

See my argument for notability above! Also, I still have other questions!

Thank you!

Carrielwilson (talk) 02:35, 12 December 2011 (UTC)

Worked hard to fix this: It may contain wording that merely promotes the subject without imparting verifiable information. Tagged since December 2011.

Carrielwilson (talk) 02:49, 12 December 2011 (UTC)

I edited language to neutralize and sourced statements about the group. I will add more links to reputable sources. Thanks! Carrie Carrielwilson (talk) 16:12, 13 December 2011 (UTC)