Talk:The Beautiful World of Jeffree Star/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 03:53, 4 April 2020 (UTC)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall: Pass
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall: Pass
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Review

 * Is there a better reference than this one? If not, please archive it through the Wayback Machine in case it changes.
 * I added a Wayback Machine archive url.
 * Reference 32 seems unneeded (see Citation overkill)
 * I deleted it.
 * Is there a better reference than the video itself to cite for the claim "Time of the Season" by The Ben Taylor Band served as the theme song of the series."
 * Not particularly, but there is a Reddit thread stating it was "Time of the Season"; however, Reddit isn't a credible source. It's listed in the Spotify playlist also referenced in the article.
 * Reference 12 is from May but is sourced for a claim for November. Can you find an updated reference?
 * The claim from November is no longer accurate since James Charles has since recoved from the 3 million subscriber drop. I reworded the sentence to make sense for the claim in May.
 * Reference 42 does not support its claim. It just shows it was trending, not that it "peaking at #1 for seven hours and staying within the top ten for fourteen hours."
 * I changed the wording to "became the #1 trending topic for several hours", which can clearly be seen in the source.


 * I will requested for a copyedit to be done on this page in order to better the prose. Jayab  314  13:20, 4 April 2020 (UTC)
 * , thanks. Honestly, this is an easy pass. Just let me know when the copyedit is done. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 17:35, 4 April 2020 (UTC)
 * The copyedit is done. Jayab  314  12:55, 26 April 2020 (UTC)
 * 👍 Thanks and congrats! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 19:16, 26 April 2020 (UTC)