Talk:The Beauty Process: Triple Platinum/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 14:20, 12 July 2017 (UTC)

Infobox
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 * Genre?
 * Use flatlist for studios.

Lead
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 * Link Reprise Records
 * Add the tour with Marlyn Manson

Background and recording
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 * which was released by Slash Records in collaboration with Reprise Records, a major record label owned by the Warner Music Group. → source?
 * "Sparks explained that spending time on the recording studio was very expensive and that the band could not afford to wait for Brinkman" → Sparks explained that there was a huge cost associated with the time spent in the recording studio, henceforth the band could not afford to wait for Brinkman (sounds better)

Music and lyrics
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 * The track "Off the Wagon" → The single "Off the Wagon"
 * Although the song promotes substance abuse → Although the track promotes substance abuse

Promotion and release
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 * "The Beauty Process was released on February 25, 1997 by Slash Records." → missing source
 * To promote the album, L7 signed on as an opening act on a Marilyn Manson tour across the US → year of the tour?
 * on the US Billboard Top 200 chart and No. 12 on the Heatseekers Albums chart, → full stop

Critical reception
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 * music critics → link to music journalism
 * Stephen Thompson of The A.V. Club → The A.V. Club's Stephen Thompson

Track listing
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 * All tracks written by Donita Sparks and Suzi Gardner. → use credits as it also proves the track listing

Personnel
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 * Use instead of "-".

Overall GA review

 * Needs charts table and genre of the album.
 * Added punk rock as the album's genre (as per reception section). Also, is it really necessary to add a table just for 2 US charts that are already mentioned in the promotion and release section? In my opinion, charts tables are only useful if the album in question has been commercially successful. --Niwi3 (talk) 20:44, 12 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Where is that on the commercial section? Well, I have seen with one, some people maybe just looking for that and don't want to read a whoel section. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:34, 12 July 2017 (UTC)


 * Few errors to amend and some other picky stuff from my part. It will be GA in no time, on hold for seven days, good luck! MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:44, 12 July 2017 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your review, really appreciated. I have addressed most of the issues you brought up and left two comments above. Let me know what you think! --Niwi3 (talk) 20:44, 12 July 2017 (UTC)


 * Fixed the remaining issues. Let me know if there is anything else that needs to be fixed. --Niwi3 (talk) 19:26, 13 July 2017 (UTC)